Question

(In memory of Rose)

I'm holding onto memories to far back to grasp
Picking up pieces of my heart that shattered like glass
I take it was too much to ask
for her to listen to my message asking for her to come back

I can still hear her voice on the phone
Saying she can't reach it cuz she's not home
And to leave your name and number at the tone
But if its Luke, leave a message for when I come home
Can't guarantee I'll pick up the phone

[phone ringing}
(voice-over)
"Hey, this is Rose. Sorry, I can't come to the phone right now. Please leave your name and number at the tone. If this is Luke calling, I love you and leave a message. Thanks bye"
"Beep"

I know I said I wouldn't call you so soon
But I couldna help but feel like there's something I can do
That doesn't involve me losing you
I'd do anything to stop the pain we're going through
I know there's something I could do

I'm holding onto memories too far back to grasp
Feelings to good to let slip into the past
While I'm picking up my heart that shattered like glass
I know its too much to ask
But baby please come back
I've never wanted something like this to happen so bad

Answer 1

Feedback and more ideas for lines are welcome

Answer 2

thats tuff

Answer 3

yeah it is and i'm looking for some guy or girl to record themselves saying the voice over and send it to me so i can work on recording it and publishing it

Answer 4

thank u for the medal

Answer 5

your welcome

Answer 6

https://voca.ro/ooWO6NCpI1q this isn't very good but yea

Answer 7

it was good

Answer 8

thanks jorell

Answer 9

@LavenderLuvBug

Answer 10

who dat

Answer 11

@LavenderLuvBug

Answer 12

@LavenderLuvBug

Answer 13

tht is my now ex gf i just want her to read it when i leave

Answer 14

ohh ok

Answer 15

This is really good and I do hope she come back for you. :)

Answer 16

Thanks man me too, did you listen to the recording?

Answer 17

oh no I need listen to it.

Answer 18

lol ight do that

Answer 19

oh man that was really good. I almost cry lol. so yeah Good Job. :)

Answer 20

Thank you so much man i appreciate that i never meant to make someone almost cry but thts what i hope she does.

Answer 21

Bro what happened

Answer 22

@Adovbush

Answer 23

DID SHE DIE I MISS OUT ON EVERTHING

Answer 24

No she's not dead derpy