Question

left, right, up, down, all lost to the sound of change
here, there, every where i go, change it mocks me so
Love, loss, my world too
lost but sister I'm holding on tight to you

I'll stand strong to keep you safe
I'll be there for you every where you go
but one day I may not live to play again
but for you I'd come back from the grave
to say I LOVE YOU LITTLE SISTER, PLEASE STAY STRONG AND KEEP MOVING ON FOR ME
KEEP MOVING ON FOR ME.

its only a rough draft and not complete but what are y'alls opinions

Answer 1

@Oddmoyu123

Answer 2

ya

Answer 3

@darkknight you have summoned me

Answer 4

@Oddmoyu123 sure. Lookin good

Answer 5

tacodille

Answer 6

That’s well written! Keep up the good work!

Answer 7

Definitely add to it :)

Answer 8

this i Oreosing great you can feel the emotion from it. you should definitely add to this