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what do you guys think of this so far?
It was a chilly young night and I was walking home from school when up ahead I saw someone under the streetlight, as I drew closer I let my eyes august and I was able to see what they were wearing-or should I say He- A leather jacket with a green long sleeve shirt and black jeans and a light and dark striped scarf. His hair was a dark brown and his eyes were as green as emeralds, he had distinctive scars on his face, he looked intimidating...I sighed in relief and punched him playfully.” What are you doing just standing here like a creep, are you trying to scare me or something Liu?” I asked. Liu laughed and said in a joking tone:” hey no need to get violent.” I rolled my eyes “You realize how Ironic you just sounded right?” he just smiled that adorable smile of his. “Let’s just go,” he said with a sweet tone that I couldn’t help but forgive him “Alright, let’s go home” I smiled and held his hand while we walked side by side.
A while later
“What movie should we watch?” he asked as he sat down beside me on the couch “Anythings fine, just don’t make it a scary movie like last time.” he laughed and put his arm over me “but I got to hold you last time..” he responded and I shot him a glare “Alright, alright no scary movies.” I sighed “Liu?” “yeah?” “You’re adorably irritating sometimes.” I said teasingly and he gave me his:” You know you love me” look. “What about Romeo and Juliet? I know you haven’t seen it yet-I heard it was really good..” he asked as he searched it up on Netflix. “Alright,” I said and laid my head on his shoulder and I could see a smile across his lips. “I’m glad you’re my Juliet, luna. ” he said lovingly “and you’re my sweet Romeo. ” I said then smiled and kissed him on the cheek. “I’d be worried if I wasn’t.” he joked and pulled me closer to him. “I love you.” He whispered in the darkness as the movie started, giving off some light. “I love you too” I whispered back. Juliet:” Oh Romeo Romeo where are thou, Romeo?”
Romeo:” Juliet my one true love, I am here, admiring your beauty for thou are more beautiful than the brightest red rose in any gardens and sweeter than any honey than my lips have had the pleasure to taste.” “Wow, and I thought my pick up lines were corny, haha” Liu joked “your pick up lines aren’t That bad.” I giggled “Keywords, that bad.” he said, “I’m just teasing you, you got me, in the end, didn’t you?” he smiled and kissed me:

Answer 1

here's the rest of it
“I’d be worried if I wasn’t.” he joked and pulled me closer to him. “I love you.” He whispered in the darkness as the movie started, giving off some light. “I love you too” I whispered back. Juliet:” Oh Romeo Romeo where are thou, Romeo?”
Romeo:” Juliet my one true love, I am here, admiring your beauty for thou are more beautiful than the brightest red rose in any gardens and sweeter than any honey than my lips have had the pleasure to taste.” “Wow, and I thought my pick up lines were corny, haha” Liu joked “your pick up lines aren’t That bad.” I giggled “Keywords, that bad.” he said, “I’m just teasing you, you got me, in the end, didn’t you?” he smiled and kissed me: “ I did indeed.” CRASH-THUD “did you hear that!?” I asked my voice low “Yeah, I did” Liu said as he grabbed his twin kitchen knives” Stay here, I’ll Go check it out.” “Be careful!” I whispered and changed into my cat form so I can hide under the couch he nodded “I will stay hidden until I come back I won’t be very long.”

TO BE CONTINUED…..

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@XxCRAZYGIRLXx @xXDerpyPugXx @Hep @CrazyHotGhost @Eddie97 @Lionblaze15 @LoneWolf

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@Aeon @InsatiableSuffering @itsyahboijaiden @dude @darkknight @DCharger96

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I like

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@Babyplier

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Thanks sis
I have another one too

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It was the end of December and I was walking home along an abandoned alleyway. I didn’t like crowds, so I had decided to take a shortcut home through the alleyway. If only I had known what would later happen. “It’s freezing, I can’t wait to get home and take a nice bath,” I thought as I walked further into the Alley when suddenly I saw him, a tall boy in a skeleton costume. His hair was snow white and his eyes...His eyes were Ice blue. Now you may think that I was surprised by his appearance but in truth, I wasn’t-this is because I dye my hair, and wear contacts. You see, I was born with white hair and Ice blue eyes, and if not for the hair dye and contacts, I would attract a lot of unwanted attention.-As I edged closer I saw something...He had wings!-I gasped in astonishment, In all my life I never saw someone similar to me and I wondered:” Could he be a hybrid like me..another survivor of the clan?” ”I thought I was the only one..” he suddenly turned and glared in my direction and I hid around the corner, instantly realizing my mistake; I was spoken out loud-Opps-A minute later, I peered around the corner where I saw him and blinked..he was gone.”Did I image it?” I knew that I hadn’t been getting much sleep lately and was extremely tired. I sighed and started walking again but I couldn’t shake the feeling that someone was watching me but when I turned around no one was there...Thud-Crash! I whipped my head and looked behind me, and got the chills. “I knew it, someone IS following me!” I sped up my pace, walking quicker but I still couldn’t shake that feeling; suddenly, I caught something-or someone- moving out of the corner of my eye and I broke into a fast sprint I dared to look behind me and I caught a glimpse and white-It was the boy, he was following me! But..why?- I didn’t want to particularly find out..something told me that this wasn’t the best time to meet who this mystery boy was...I was close to my limit of hiding my ears and tail and for all I know, he could turn me over to the organization; for all I know he could be apart of them! “Ugh, I gotta get home quickly...I’m running out of time!” I thought as my mother’s mantra echoed in my head:” Stay secret. Stay hidden. Stay safe.” After a minute or so of sprinting, I could see it in the distance-the lights to my home! “Almost there; just a bit more!” I thought as I sped up. As I reached the gate to my home I looked back and saw him in the alley-watching me- for a few seconds, there was eye contact between us and I felt a strange pull- A pull that made me want to go back to him-his eyes were so sad as he watched me go but I had reached my limit and the words kept repeating in my head:” Stay secret. Stay hidden, Stay Safe.” I didn’t want him to see my form and be afraid of me like the few who knew, so I went inside and closed the door behind me; Instantly, my ears and tail popped out and I gave a sigh of relief, letting my ears down in the process.”That was too close for comfort…” “I wonder if he’s still out there?” I thought as I walked to the window and looked out and saw that he wasn’t there anymore.

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I like it.

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@Holly

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Awesome. I like it :) :)

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Nice

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:3

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This is frfr sooo good

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write it till the endddddd lol

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I like it

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ROMEO WHERE ART THOU ROMEO YOU SAID U WERE GOING TO PICK ME UP

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Aww lunar you remember me that makes me so happy! I live the story btw and I have a couple of tips for ya. If I was you I'd try to add more adjectives. It will make your story more descriptive therefore making it more interesting. Also remember you are trying to unfold a story in your readers head. Just like a dream or a movie. The more details, the better. Anyway again I live the story and I hope this helps!