Question

I wrote down lyrics to a song, though I don't think it's good.

The light you give away, fades me away
The heavy light blinds me 
Heavy light every where, but not every where
Hope is all that's left

We block each other of each other's light
The heavy light kills and blinds me
Where ever you go, I see you
Where ever I go, I see you

Heavy light sees nothing, nothing but pain
Pain that blinds itself, kills itself
Only good it does is guide me
Guide me towards you, the source

There is to much, uncontrollable Heavy Light
I'll never know where you went, why you left
It's too much, Heavy Light

Answer 1

This is very good!

Answer 2

that ish very good <3

Answer 3

This is amazingly good