pls help people Which sentences would most benefit from revision to eliminate unneeded content that may confuse the reader? The quality of the detail is more important than the quantity. One of the most difficult tasks of model making is applying the tiny decals. Tweezers and a magnifying glass are helpful tools in model building, as well as a dish of water for soaking the decals until they are wet enough. Railroading modelers build locomotives using tools that are especially made for model building.
@Td The question to ask yourself is 'what is the objective of this sentence?' Then once you've found the 'point' or 'subject' of each sentence, see which one has the most clutter around it, perhaps even drawing away from the point that the sentence is trying to make.
Or just look at which sentence confuses you the most, haha
lol thx i apreciate it
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