Question

"Lookin' For Another Pure Love"

Never tears or sorrows came before me in my mind,
I had no problems, never a problem in my life,
Never a worry on my mind

All my days before today were happy,
And secure until your phone call,
You were tellin' me goodbye

Now I'm lookin' for another love,
I'm lookin' for another pure love in my life
And I'm lookin' for another love,
I'm lookin' for another pure love in my life

Now the wheel of fate has turned,
I'm worried 'bout the new love you've discovered,
He is a problem in my life,
I have a problem on my mind

Things you cherish most in your life,
Can be taken if they're left neglected,
Leavin' a problem in your life

'Cause now I'm lookin' for another love,
I'm lookin' for another pure love in my life, ooh,
And now I'm lookin' for another love,
And now I'm lookin' for another love,
I'm lookin' for another pure love in my life, ooh,
I'm lookin' for another love,
I'm lookin for another pure love in my life

Answer 1

I have gone through this many time and I love it really good job

Answer 2

Your An Awesome song writer! I wish I was as good as you! Amazing!!!

Answer 3

@Eddie97

Answer 4

Thank you @Holly @countrygirl68

It only takes perseverance and patience into doing something. I can help you with the songwriting part.

Answer 5

@mikewwe13 thanks you so much @////@

Answer 6

ok, i'll see you when you get back. take your time

Answer 7

Nevermind I was wrong it is later

Answer 8

oh okay, good

Answer 9

this one is ok but there are a few flaws, the last verse it needs to be shorter or out completely and replaced with more story line, the first half of the song i was very interested in it but you lost me at the middle and end. is it a break up, is it you trying to get back with her, or is it you completely lost interest in her. make the middle and ending of your song reinforce the point your trying to get people to realize.

Answer 10

Ok i get your point, i could've made it a lil shorter at the ending but as far as the meaning of the song on what it's based on.

Well, if you can tell by the title of the song that Looking for another pure love is a song about a man who search for another love like he has experienced once before. He never felt heartbreak or sadness until this woman left him. While the song mainly mentions this man’s search for a love pure like he once had, it also addresses his concern with his old partner, as well as simultaneously teaching them a lesson.

Answer 11

now that you told me the meaning of the song and what it represents i can see that you started to explain it in the song but still the end doesn't support it, the end of the song is repeating what was already established in the beginning. he has a problem but has yet to fix it.

Answer 12

True but at the end, it was like the chorus of the song to repeat but i think i can kinda edit that one out