Question

I’m lost in this world, with all its hatred
Love was shattered a long time ago
Walk in the streets with all the yelling shouting and hating
All hope is gone, you try to help but fail
Will ever get better in this world

If we only loved each other for who you are
Talking with words of kindness
All of our lives will be better
Stop hating and show that you care
If you only cared
We are all broken inside
But we need the light to shine bright

We lost our color now we all see black and white
Can’t we show our love to our families?
Life won’t be the same with all the shootings
Killings, don’t you think this is enough
Don’t let people slip out of your hands grab on with a strong hold
Love can heal the broken hearts

Answer 1

Here is a little one but I think it sucks

Answer 2

@Eddie97 @mikewwe13

Answer 3

hmm wow i'm very impressed and you actually think this song you written sucks.

It fits a lot with today. i understood by how much the lyrics spoke out about the hatred and animosity that is currently happening in the world today that if we all can just make a way to find peace within ourselves and everyone with love that i think the world can come as a whole to stand in unity to put an end to misery and sorrow to turn into joy and happiness.

Answer 4

this is a good song, i see what you are trying to get the listeners to understand but you keep straying off to something else and going back to the main point. the lyrics are choppy and some of them you dont need in there. with a bit of editing you will make this song perfect. good song overall but it needs work.

Answer 5

@Holly Your really great!!!

Answer 6

@Eddie97 I was at lunch @mikewwe13

Answer 7

@Eddie97 thanks you

Answer 8

@mikewwe13 thanks @///@

Answer 9

it's okay and you're welcome

Answer 10

@countrygirl68 thks girl

Answer 11

@Holly No Problem :)

Answer 12

@Holly no problem lol