Question

White lies
Not the truth
Red wine
No proof
That i was here with someone other than you
Dancing with her under a full moon
Ik your thinking it shoulda been you
But all i can say is we're through

You and I we re e just a bunch of small talk
Always ending in one of us being p***ed off
The others standing there in shock
It's wbout time that I walked off

"I guess its time I tell you I never really liked our conversations. Ya know, where I text and you don't respond. Or the ones where your flirting with other guys while we're at home on the couch and im tryingnto talk to you but your on your phone. Its like im not even there at all ya know. Like you think your alone but I'm right there. Well lets see what my friend says about that. Yo Eddie!! Giver your piece of mind man."

Girl he shoulda left you a long time ago
Sent you packing and off to Cairo
Btw he on the gangsta's payroll

Answer 1

This is the song i started and need a lil help @Eddie97

Answer 2

small typo in the second verse first line.
pretty good so far. also make another page on google docs so i cant help you write it. do you still have me gmail?

Answer 3

Ight i will and i dont think so

Answer 4

ok i sent you my gmail in dms

Answer 5

@DCharger96 nice

Answer 6

i like it! Are you going to record it?

Answer 7

Yea maybe

Answer 8

ok.. um... i just saw this now and it's amazing! you should 1000% record this!

Answer 9

@milkystxrz when we are done with it its going to be 10000 times better than this and we may record it when its finished

Answer 10

@Eddie97 oh ok that should be exciting!

Answer 11

@Eddie97 Can't wait!