Question

( Walk the broken road)
I was 5 years old when my dad died,
Told me to start a new life,
I didn't even see the light shining so blindly over me,

I was a boat stuck in a bottle,
Never had the chance to touch the shore,
Drowning in rage,
Burning in flames,
Maybe I am just a another mystery,
I tried to win this war,
Tried to make things new,
I fell down once,
Couldn't get up,
All I saw was the broken road ahead,

Answer 1

@mikewwe13 @Eddie97

Answer 2

this is pretty good, its a bit too short for me to give any feed back though. is it finished?

Answer 3

its not finished yet

Answer 4

oh okay. so far its pretty good, i hope to read it when youre done.

Answer 5

me too but even tho, this is emotional

Answer 6

U did great keep at it

Answer 7

@Elephant2020 Thanks bro!

Answer 8

@countrygirl68 anytime sis

Answer 9

@countrygirl68 I feel this this is me now

Answer 10

@Holly Yeah, its sorta how alot of people feel....

Answer 11

Aww sad but good