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Rewrite the following sentence so that the error is corrected. There was complete silence around me I still couldn't fall asleep
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@MrMudd183
both of these can be broken into seperate sentences. "There was complete silence around me." that is a good descriptive sentence by itself, but it could be better. if you add a comma before "I still couldn't fall asleep" then it would make the sentence stronger. it's saying that the room was so silent, that the person still couldn't fall alseep
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