Question

Rewrite the sentence to make the pronoun reference clear.

She traced her ancestry back to the original president of the college, which her roommate thought was unfair.

Answer 1

thoughts on this one?

the original pronoun reference is unclear, as "her roomate" could be in reference to the subject of the sentence "she," or to the president of the college. as a suggestion, perhaps giving the subject a name, and re-writing "her roomate" as ______'s roomate, where their name is re-stated in the blank.

of course, if you're given answer choices, please feel free to post those as well