Question

My science teacher explained how the weather cycle works using an illustration.

Which is the best revision of this sentence?

Answer 1

next time please post the choices:

- My science teacher explained how the weather cycle, using an illustration, works.
- Using an illustration, my science teacher explained how the weather cycle works.
- Using an illustration, how the weather cycle works, explained my science teacher.
- My science teacher explained using an illustration how the weather cycle works.

generally, modifiers like "using an illustration" should be placed closer to the word(s) they modify. So, what should "using an illustration" modify, and where should it be placed to make the sentence more clear?