Read Delilah’s personal narrative. My cat has been in my family for six years. We adopted her from the animal shelter when she was two years old and I was nine. Her name is Bettie. She is a very kind and loving cat. She always cheers me up when I feel sad. She has taught me a lot about kindness. What would best improve Delilah’s narrative? information about her cat’s background words that label the qualities of her cat explanation of the effect her cat had on her life examples that demonstrate her cat’s qualities
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Well, all the choices seem to make sense. Bettie already has written about the effect the cat has had in her life, though. And “kind and loving” are words that label its qualities. And she’s also added some information of its background, saying it was at the animal shelter, and it was two. So which choice is left? What’s remaining that would improve this narrative?
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