Read the paragraph from a personal narrative.

1. I met Elisa. 2. She was sitting on a blanket with her mom and her sister. 3. I was tossing a softball back-and-forth with some friends. 4. It was a really hot day at the park, and my friends and I were sweating a lot. 5. We went to drink from the fountain, but the water was hot too. 6. Elisa called us over to her blanket and pointed to an ice chest. 7. “Help yourself,” she said. 8. When I lifted the lid, the tops of several brightly colored fruit bars came into view.

Which is the best revision of sentence 1?

He met Elisa.
Last summer, I met Elisa.
The next day, I met Elisa.
I met her.

Question

Read the paragraph from a personal narrative.

1. I met Elisa. 2. She was sitting on a blanket with her mom and her sister. 3. I was tossing a softball back-and-forth with some friends. 4. It was a really hot day at the park, and my friends and I were sweating a lot. 5. We went to drink from the fountain, but the water was hot too. 6. Elisa called us over to her blanket and pointed to an ice chest. 7. “Help yourself,” she said. 8. When I lifted the lid, the tops of several brightly colored fruit bars came into view.

Which is the best revision of sentence 1?

He met Elisa.
Last summer, I met Elisa.
The next day, I met Elisa.
I met her.

Hannahbell · Answer

The answer is D) I met her