Question

can someone edit my memoir? please provide any criticism/comments/suggestions! i also need help coming up with a title. thank you in advanced!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_IdHG2WLR32sKTf412lBY5i44yhl__9sJEnPCZyztSM/edit?usp=sharing

Answer 1

specifically any feedback on how to make it shorter without feeling choppy would be so very appreciated!!!

Answer 2

@dude @Ultrilliam @jhonyy9 ?

Answer 3

i do not feel like reading all that its friday im not reading my own stuff

Answer 4

haha understandable

Answer 5

let me guess, ur in 7th grade?

Answer 6

i got it

Answer 7

https://pinellasprep-my.sharepoint.com/:w:/r/personal/gianna_watson_ppa-student_org/_layouts/15/Doc.aspx?sourcedoc=%7B97A83EE9-FE0D-4B3B-AD33-5D2FBB6DA1C7%7D&file=Document11.docx&wdOrigin=OFFICECOM-WEB.START.MRU&ct=1601667893135&action=default&mobileredirect=true

Answer 8

@bella14 your link doesnt grant me permission to view :(

Answer 9

ok can i paste it to yours

Answer 10

ill make a new doc and make you an editor

Answer 11

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BMDr1hT0vzZRoOgyHJRefbYli7w3yGYu8Pdaeid7BEg/edit?usp=sharing

Answer 12

me

Answer 13

you can look now it should be there

Answer 14

i only see a page in there

Answer 15

what do you mean

Answer 16

do you have word?

Answer 17

if not look at your messages