Question

do you think this is good

Nights and Dragons by Abigail Prynne. There was this little girl that was fascinated by these magnificent creatures called dragons. She wanted to figure out if they exist or have ever existed so she decided to research. Many scientists have proven that dragons never existed but she wants to believe that they did. So with what her Grandma had taught her, she didn’t give up and she kept digging. Continuing with her research she stumbled across some very interesting papers and things giving her the idea that dragons did once exist. Though she had found some facts she felt there was more and continued to search for the truth, she found that some people have thought up these very odd ideas about how dragons have lived on this Earth. Though there is evidence they might have existed there is two sides of the story some people believe they have roamed this world some people disagree. But she likes to end with the story that they have once existed.

Answer 1

its ok

Answer 2

work on ur conclusion

Answer 3

any suggestions for the conclusion???

Answer 4

help me with mines then i will give you a better conclusion

Answer 5

ok ill try my best.

Answer 6

ok ill try my best.

Answer 7

ok ill try my best.

Answer 8

r u gonna help

Answer 9

ill still help u

Answer 10

nvm

Answer 11

the server shut down

Answer 12

its ight

Answer 13

Yes Definitely

Answer 14

that's kinda good. I like it.

Answer 15

it's very cool. I love how it's focused on dragons and how mythical it seems but you also sqeezed some science in there too it is very very well written and it is truly beautiful I love how much thought you put into this even if it's just a short pragraph

Answer 16

yea it looks very nice