Question

how does this stand as a free form poem?
i wrote it just before i posted it.

who loves life even when there is nothing to love,but here i am loving just to not fall and finding more love everywhere i go and even when abused i loved even when im torn apart i love and love has become my depression for i feel if i stop loving the little that i have i will fall into a darker place than ive ever been, one so dark in cancel out all light even the strongest lights. but love is good right, so why do i feel so down as if my love net that holds me up is warped an soon to break, except when i talk to her, when i talk to her i feel like ive been been brought to the clouds, like ive been lifted to a whole new place beyond the dreams of even the most vivid dreamers.
love is like a poem it never ends, it just stops.

Answer 1

hey do you wanna be friends i can relate to you

Answer 2

there are some errors but its free form

Answer 3

ok thanks

Answer 4

np

Answer 5

thast sad

Answer 6

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Acolgrove
thast sad
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
yes its how i feel recently but as a freeform poem how does it stand

Answer 7

i wrote this just before i posted it btw