Question

What would best improve Delilah’s narrative?

Answer 1

Can u post Delilah's narrative?

Answer 2

yeah

Answer 3

My cat has been in my family for six years. We adopted her from the animal shelter when she was two years old and I was nine. Her name is Bettie. She is a very kind and loving cat. She always cheers me up when I feel sad. She has taught me a lot about kindness.

Answer 4

overuse of the word she

Answer 5

mybe replace some periods with commas

Answer 6

oh ok thanks

Answer 7

the sentances are way too short

Answer 8

thats y i say the commas

Answer 9

Like the part where it says her name is betty

Answer 10

there should be a coma

Answer 11

. Her name is Bettie. She is a very kind and loving cat.)=this should be together and replace the period with a coma

Answer 12

tru😂