Question

This is a sample summary something I'm writing for a contest/grade.
I would like to get some feedback and or pointers on things i could do to improve my work

Answer 1

Wow that’s interesting and wow

Answer 2

Honestly this is like a draft to me.

Answer 3

U may not have been able to see the whole thing

Answer 4

i think it's good. However, there are some slight errors like "where" instead of "were"
and starting sentences with "but"

overall, great job!!!

Answer 5

thanks ill make sure to fix that!