Question

I need help paraphrasing this paragraph

Put simply, NASA creates jobs. Jobs, in return, help the economy. A single space project can employ hundreds of workers from high level, top security jobs to lower level, yet important role players. Scientists are assigned to solve problems. Engineers are contracted to build prototypes. Truckers are hired to transport materials. Large corporations are paid for contributions, earning profits so they may hire more employees.

Answer 1

I mean is this reasonings being stated?

Answer 2

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Hoodmemes
I would saying it looks good,but not your opening statement its not as long as it should be.and add more details to job details etc,like what they do and how u nasa benifits from it.
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
*job description

Answer 3

I did not write the paragraph I need help paraphrasing it. like rewriting it in 1 or 2 sentence in my own words

Answer 4

ovi in those 1 or 2 sentences u wanna state some of the jobs

Answer 5

ok

Answer 6

"Put simply, NASA creates jobs." repharse this using some smiliar words like "provides jobs"

Answer 7

does this sound good.
NASA creates jobs that helped the economy, a single Space Project can provide hundreds of workers with jobs .
is this good or should I add more

Answer 8

its good but u should at more

Answer 9

Like the types of jobs it provides

Answer 10

ok I'll work on it. ill post it after I'm finish . sorry I did not answer till now I was feeding my horses.

Answer 11

how bout this
NASA creates jobs that help the economy, a single Space Project can you provide hundreds of workers with jobs. The Jobs can vary from high and low level security to Truckers hired to transport materials to scientists and engineers.

Answer 12

is this better

Answer 13

Yes

Answer 14

thanks for helping me

Answer 15

np