i was told to write a real life situation and i want to know if this is correctly written and everything is good

on a friday night. there was a car meet and i decided to go. the car meet was amazing, their was a burnout and drifting contest, a small takeover and all of that joyful stuff. then we meet up at a different location that was more sucluded and not as easy to find. we popped our hoods for people to look at the engines such as the cars that have a 2jz engine swap in then and for the sexy japensse girls like the gtrs and supras. after a while of doing that we would rev our engines at the end of the night. before we all left the cops showed up and tried to trap us in but we speed off adn that is when we took over thr highway most of us going faster then 110mph and red lining our cars trying to get away but we are smart enough and and at the meet we took off our license plates so they couldnt find where we lived. the obeesion people have with cars is a dangourous thing and a expensive hobby. the cars when we go on drives late at night with no one on the road and us jsut vibing and speeding calms us and makes us feel safe and takes away all our pain we are feeling, its something alot of people cant comreheand they prefer thier drugs and i prefer working on cars. same thing but different.

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i was told to write a real life situation and i want to know if this is correctly written and everything is good

on a friday night. there was a car meet and i decided to go. the car meet was amazing, their was a burnout and drifting contest, a small takeover and all of that joyful stuff. then we meet up at a different location that was more sucluded and not as easy to find. we popped our hoods for people to look at the engines such as the cars that have a 2jz engine swap in then and for the sexy japensse girls like the gtrs and supras. after a while of doing that we would rev our engines at the end of the night. before we all left the cops showed up and tried to trap us in but we speed off adn that is when we took over thr highway most of us going faster then 110mph and red lining our cars trying to get away but we are smart enough and and at the meet we took off our license plates so they couldnt find where we lived. the obeesion people have with cars is a dangourous thing and a expensive hobby. the cars when we go on drives late at night with no one on the road and us jsut vibing and speeding calms us and makes us feel safe and takes away all our pain we are feeling, its something alot of people cant comreheand they prefer thier drugs and i prefer working on cars. same thing  but different.

Hoodmemes · Answer

(On friday night) u need to look at that again make the sentence longer by adding a (,) such as "On friday night,there was a car meet and i decided to go."
(dont got time to help on each sentence in yo passage)

cpl106 · Answer

$\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}$ @Hoodmemes
(On friday night) u need to look at that again make the sentence longer by adding a (,) such as "On friday night,there was a car meet and i decided to go."
(dont got time to help on each sentence in yo passage)
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you're all good but thank you

Jade123 · Answer

sorry but I dont know grammar at all

cpl106 · Answer

$\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}$ @Jade123
sorry but I dont know grammar at all
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neither do i

Jade123 · Answer

oh okay

cpl106 · Answer

yeah but how you been ?

Jade123 · Answer

good hbu

cpl106 · Answer

higher than a kite but good

fortnitegod · Answer

who got fortnite

Jade123 · Answer

me$\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}$ @fortnitegod
who got fortnite
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me

cpl106 · Answer

$\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}$ @fortnitegod
who got fortnite
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on what system

cpl106 · Answer

nvm we got cross play now but i do