Question

Tell me what you think please and thank you:
I'm a wolf
The animal that's misunderstood
Who's called a creature
Automatically judged
On the outside you see ugliness
Inside there's beauty
Beauty that nobody knows
Hidden talent that is never discovered
For no one wants to be around the wolf
Around such a hideous creature
I am a she wolf
Known as the Alpha
Shattered and broken down
For no one will hear me howl
Since they are afraid
Afraid to get to know me
Because no one wants to befriend a Wild Wolf
For they might get eaten

Answer 1

its nice

Answer 2

Are those all metaphors?

Answer 3

I don't know, and tbh don't care. This is just something I put together. I have a whole lot more poems I just wanted feedback on this one

Answer 4

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @RodeWolf
I don't know, and tbh don't care. This is just something I put together. I have a whole lot more poems I just wanted feedback on this one
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I would say it sounds ok.

Answer 5

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @destinyjaramillo1
its nice
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Thxs

Answer 6

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Hoodmemes
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @RodeWolf
I don't know, and tbh don't care. This is just something I put together. I have a whole lot more poems I just wanted feedback on this one
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I would say it sounds ok.
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Thxs appreciate it