Question

Thoughts please?
I might not have a sexy body
Although I was raised in the country
Yeah that money doesn’t matter
It all comes from the slaughter…
8:00 is my time to be a star
Dancing my butt off on that boxcar
Those nights are lit
My spotlight is moonlit
The guys try to get handsie
But they aint gettin’ no candy
Not from me anyways
My legs are closed even on valentines day

Answer 1

its alright

Answer 2

id tone it down a bit tho

Answer 3

turn the word s**** into "perfect body"

Answer 4

@dude

Answer 5

I-

Answer 6

Do what?

Answer 7

hmm its ok just like....add somthings out

Answer 8

ig

Answer 9

aight thanks everyone

Answer 10

np

Answer 11

yurp