Question

So i wrote this song. It was originally about someone i like, and now i can say its about someone i care about dearly owo.
I need an opinion.

OWO

Sittin in a cold room
Sipin on my tea and
Suddenly I realize theres not a hint of gloom
and my tummy is fluttering because you said you like me.
Hide my face behind my hands
Even though the blush barely stands out
And suddenly my day is so much brighter~

.+/Chorus\+.
The fall and aunumn leaves flutter down
just like my stomach when you text me
and theres no hint of a frown
as i text you back
my heart buzzing like a bee
OWO (a bunch in a verse)

Your so chaotic
and so much fun to be around
but for now we have to be platonic
because if were found out were hell bound
baby~
(go back to chorus and finish with the owos)

This is played on a ukelele and im VERY proud of it, its not my first song, but its my more positive ones. Thank you for reading!! =w='''

Answer 1

noice e.e

Answer 2

8/10

Answer 3

8/10? q-q hannnnkuuuu~

Answer 4

your way to nice

Answer 5

i like turtles

Answer 6

its good

Answer 7

SO SAPPY AND CORNY (but overall its lovely)

Answer 8

*weird dead duck noises*
THANK YOU

Answer 9

LMAOOOOOOOOooo

Answer 10

she said dead duck noises

Answer 11

is this abt k y k y?

Answer 12

y e s

Answer 13

yolo i approve i ship 10/10 would ship again

Answer 14

AAAAH

Answer 15

@Kyky232 UwU OwO

Answer 16

ferny got off and now im bored

Answer 17

._.

Answer 18

I- im not crying you are... Baby... This is so cute😭😭

Answer 19

awwwwwee dont cry its jus a song

Answer 20

HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM

Answer 21

k im bored adios

Answer 22

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @yogirlkaylie
awwwwwee dont cry its jus a song
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
The fact that they wrote it for me though-

Answer 23

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Kyky232
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @yogirlkaylie
awwwwwee dont cry its jus a song
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
The fact that they wrote it for me though-
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
ik cuteeeeeee

Answer 24

this is so cute what-