Question

Y'all seem to like poems so here is one of mine. Hope y'all like.
Anger flows within my veins pulsing through my heart. Sorrow weighs on my spirit and somehow this makes art.
I wallow.
If my body fell dead this instant my soul would become a poltergeist left to torment the waking world with the pain I never let go... I thought I set it free but yet again it comes back to me.
I'm being eaten alive by my demons yet all I do is stand and watch
How shameful is this? How vulgar and weak, too afraid to make a peep. I shut my eyes tight and hope they dont hear me weep.
I...wallow
My creator cries as I hope Thee does not exist.
For I have gravely missed the mark.
I speak as though my time is up because I feel i'm in a rut.
Stuck. Unable to identify this cloud in me i'm just stuck…
No. let me rephrase, I am not stuck. Stuck would mean I cannot get out. I can get out for two paths lay clear as day ahead of me.
What one will I choose?
No i'm not stuck im screwed.
I grieve. It seems I have given up.

Answer 1

omgg i love ittt

Answer 2

Thank youuuu 🥰

Answer 3

Depressing poems just aint my thing i rate this a (3/10)

Answer 4

XD

Answer 5

Thank u for reading it tho! I got a love poem but it brings back bad memories. Honestly I cant make happy art to save my life.

Answer 6

cool.

Answer 7

i do raps buh i still like dis one doe

Answer 8

ik I be reading yours you got sum skills i write raps to just not as much bc I always stumble on my words smh

Answer 9

thank you @Myadapimp

Answer 10

ITs GOOODDD :)))

Answer 11

it's full of all these feelings it's almost as if I am feeling the same.... But i'm not. I'm just patheticaly sitting in my chair all alone at home.... meh

Answer 12

its really nice