Question

Just need some feedback on what I'm about to submit.Like what I need to fix etc.

Answer 1

And this is the question.

Answer 2

after you quote from the text, do not put a period inside the quotes, it goes outside of them.

also, you said, "Steve was fired from his own company by the board of Directors. Also, he was thinking about giving up and how he got fired from his own company."

so for that^ it should be Board of Directors, and you already mentioned being fired by his company so saying it again in the next sentence makes it a little repetitive.

then in the next part when you say, "He says his Success was..." and you go on to quote him, I would change the wording of that bc it seems a little weird. You could try something like: When thinking about his success, Jobs says, "............"

does this help any?

Answer 3

It does,I submitted that 3 or 2 years ago and was wondering what I did wrong-thank u

Answer 4

np