Question

Judge this please.
When I look up to the sky I feel a lot of emotions
I feel Gods up there with his arms wide open
when I feel his presence I fall down to the ground
not a soul can compare to Gods holy crown
there is nothing in this world we can't face alone
so he's holding our hand guiding us to the safe zone
open your eyes and feel his love say thank you to the only God that lives above
spread out your arms and embrace his glory, repent all your sins and say you're sorry.
This is all I got so far.

Answer 1

oh ok

Answer 2

its good tho

Answer 3

DUDE! I love this. Amen!!

Answer 4

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @RodeWolf
DUDE! I love this. Amen!!
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Thank you! I was doubting whether it's good or not.

Answer 5

It's so great! fr! Keep going!

Answer 6

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @MiraAngel
It's so great! fr! Keep going!
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Thank you!!

Answer 7

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @RodeWolf
DUDE! I love this. Amen!!
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Thank you! I was doubting whether it's good or not.
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Good? Nah it aint good it's idk: Heart touching, inspiring, and I could make this into a song if I actually tried.

Answer 8

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @RodeWolf
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @RodeWolf
DUDE! I love this. Amen!!
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Thank you! I was doubting whether it's good or not.
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Good? Nah it aint good it's idk: Heart touching, inspiring, and I could make this into a song if I actually tried.
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Hey you know you could use it if you want

Answer 9

Nah I don't like to take someone elses work

Answer 10

I was just expressing how your work was

Answer 11

what is it?

Answer 12

its good lol

Answer 13

I LOVE IT!

Answer 14

honestly i needed to hea that poem in my head rn keep it up :) its amazing

Answer 15

also i have a question

Answer 16

when you finish this can you dm me the whole thing i want to remember this its really god

Answer 17

good*

Answer 18

Yeah for sure!

Answer 19

xio this is really good

Answer 20

i love it

Answer 21

dm me the whole thing to plz

Answer 22

it is amazing