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Acolgrove:

so i have been working on a song and i am stuck on lyrics so if any one has any ideas please share or if i should change some of the lyrics. here i what i have so far sometimes u never want things to change u think it will turn out strange some days are so perfect other days just fell so worthless. Why do things change when they can stay so perfect change will never be worth it. Change feels so unserure and unsafe. this is where i got stuck

Laylalyssa:

I think its good so far

Acolgrove:

thx

Laylalyssa:

np

BrunotheRAT:

so just close your eyes and hide or change UGH IM SORRY I SUCK AT MAKING SONGS BUT THATS SOMETHING I THINK IS GOOD LOL

Acolgrove:

lol thx

BrunotheRAT:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Acolgrove lol thx \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) yw lol

tiffbb101:

I write songs so if ya need any help you can always dm me

Acolgrove:

thx right now i am just stuck on lyrics lol

tiffbb101:

Well the lyrics are good and the connect to one another just make sure when you add more it's all connected to the same topic

BrunotheRAT:

so we dont change because we are so perfect {im just writing random things you might wanna choose from lol}

Acolgrove:

okay thx

Acolgrove:

i think i am going to chang worth it to worthless

sealake101:

oooh its really good lol

Acolgrove:

lol thx

Acolgrove:

i didn't think it would turn out good lol

sealake101:

haha

Hoodmemes:

cool

yogirlkaylie:

its good so far

Acolgrove:

thank u

yogirlkaylie:

np

Timmyspu:

Ya I think is great

Acolgrove:

thank you

Timmyspu:

If you need any help I can help you

Acolgrove:

okay thx i am mostly just stuck on lyrics now

Timmyspu:

Some of your lyrices should come about from things u r into or things you like

Acolgrove:

okay

Timmyspu:

what type of song are you trying to do

Acolgrove:

um idk

Timmyspu:

that is also something u need to pick out like is the song going to be a wrap or a pop song or country

Acolgrove:

it would be a pop song

Timmyspu:

Ok so how do you want it to start

Acolgrove:

well i already started it

Timmyspu:

How does it go

Acolgrove:

its up on the question

Timmyspu:

ok..

Timmyspu:

I like your song but me not be fishy

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