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XxDeadxX:

I made this song for my girl do u think she’ll like it

XxDeadxX:

This one's for you Mrs beckham! My love for you is like the most beautiful turnip, Your face reminds me of caring butterfly, Together, we are like muffins and brown sauce. Oh darling jordan, My beautiful turnip, My caring runner bean, The perfect companion to my muffins soul. Roses are red, Violets are blue, I like jordan, But not as much as I love kissing with you! Oh darling jordan, Your insides are like loving petals on a spring day, You're like the most helpful barmaid to ever walk Weston-super-Mare. Your caring butterfl face, Your brown sauce soul, Your loving insides, Your helpful barmaid being... How could I look at another when our beautiful turnip love is so strong? I love you Mrs beckham!

TETSXPREME:

is this for a teacher???!!?

XxDeadxX:

No

XxDeadxX:

Gf

itsmehjay:

oh i was aboutta sayy...

CancerGirl:

I guess she likes

TETSXPREME:

lmaooo

itsmehjay:

well this is bootiful lol

CancerGirl:

Ye

TETSXPREME:

yahh

summerbabyy1217:

i really likeee

Acolgrove:

um i don't think she wants to be called a turnip

tiffbb101:

Aww i think it's cute and I'm sure she would love it. Even if it's not that good she knows you love her and would do anything to show her

Acolgrove:

just giving my honest opinion

summerbabyy1217:

u can change it but i think its really nicee

tiffbb101:

I think it's good yall are crazy

XioGonz:

You worded your song well, I feel it's a bit cheesy though. Maybe take outhe the runner bean and turnip and a couple of other words.

XxDeadxX:

Ty

XioGonz:

No Problem

Myadapimp:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @TETSXPREME is this for a teacher???!!? \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) ONG I THOUGHT SO TOOOOOOO LMAOOOOOOOO

franny:

people making songs now?!

tiffbb101:

It don't have to be perfect i think it's fine

TETSXPREME:

XDD

DEMO4L1ZE:

bro ur girl is ur teacher

Myadapimp:

i made a song so yeaaaaaaaa lmaoooo

XxDeadxX:

Y’all wanna hear my other song

Myadapimp:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @DEMO4L1ZE bro ur girl is ur teacher \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) its his gf lmaoooo

summerbabyy1217:

the only thing that matters is that u tried

DEMO4L1ZE:

yea

Myadapimp:

yesssiiiirrr tell em againnnnn

itsmehjay:

wait is ur gf cheating on u??? Cause said "Mrs." 👀

Myadapimp:

oop

XxDeadxX:

Medals 0 ah, yeah Ayo, fishy brothas, it's time. It's time, fishy brothas (aight, fishy brothas, begin). Straight out the hot dungeons of rap. The apple drops deep as does my leg. I never shout, 'cause to shout is the sister-in-law of egg. Beyond the walls of jugs, life is defined. I think of fishy’s when I'm in an Atlantic ocean state of mind. Hope the nutmeg got some segue. My bootleg don't like no dirty keg. Run up to the egg and get the peg. In an Atlantic ocean state of mind. What more could you ask for? The chewy apple? You complain about fishy’s stink. I gotta love it though - somebody still speaks for the grapple. I'm rappin' to the rod, And I'm gonna move your pod. Full, ugly, poor, like a map Boy, I tell you, I thought you were an app. I can't take the fishy’s stink, can't take the pain. I woulda tried to travel I guess I got no disdain. I'm rappin' to the pod, And I'm gonna move your rod. Yea, yaz, in an Atlantic ocean state of mind. When I was young my sister-in-law had a dapple. I waz kicked out without no pineapple. I never thought I'd see that snapple. Ain't a soul alive that could take my sister-in-law's grapple. A hairy teddy is quite the steady. Thinking of fishy’s. Yaz, thinking of fishy’s (fishy’s

XxDeadxX:

Ty yall

yogirlkaylie:

u have a gf?

yogirlkaylie:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @summerbabyy1217 the only thing that matters is that u tried \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) not hard enough

summerbabyy1217:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @yogirlkaylie \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @summerbabyy1217 the only thing that matters is that u tried \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) not hard enough \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) well then try harder take ur time it doesnt have to be perfect as long as u try hard and show her you tried making something for her she will love it

yogirlkaylie:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @summerbabyy1217 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @yogirlkaylie \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @summerbabyy1217 the only thing that matters is that u tried \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) not hard enough \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) well then try harder take ur time it doesnt have to be perfect as long as u try hard and show her you tried making something for her she will love it \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) i thought it was for a teacher doe buh ig u righh

summerbabyy1217:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @yogirlkaylie \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @summerbabyy1217 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @yogirlkaylie \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @summerbabyy1217 the only thing that matters is that u tried \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) not hard enough \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) well then try harder take ur time it doesnt have to be perfect as long as u try hard and show her you tried making something for her she will love it \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) i thought it was for a teacher doe buh ig u righh \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) why u thought it was for the teacher

yogirlkaylie:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @summerbabyy1217 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @yogirlkaylie \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @summerbabyy1217 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @yogirlkaylie \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @summerbabyy1217 the only thing that matters is that u tried \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) not hard enough \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) well then try harder take ur time it doesnt have to be perfect as long as u try hard and show her you tried making something for her she will love it \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) i thought it was for a teacher doe buh ig u righh \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) why u thought it was for the teacher \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) bc he said "i love you Mrs what eva df her name was"

summerbabyy1217:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @yogirlkaylie \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @summerbabyy1217 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @yogirlkaylie \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @summerbabyy1217 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @yogirlkaylie \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @summerbabyy1217 the only thing that matters is that u tried \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) not hard enough \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) well then try harder take ur time it doesnt have to be perfect as long as u try hard and show her you tried making something for her she will love it \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) i thought it was for a teacher doe buh ig u righh \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) why u thought it was for the teacher \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) bc he said "i love you Mrs what eva df her name was" \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) ohhh okayy i see how u thought that tho

yogirlkaylie:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @summerbabyy1217 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @yogirlkaylie \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @summerbabyy1217 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @yogirlkaylie \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @summerbabyy1217 \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @yogirlkaylie \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @summerbabyy1217 the only thing that matters is that u tried \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) not hard enough \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) well then try harder take ur time it doesnt have to be perfect as long as u try hard and show her you tried making something for her she will love it \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) i thought it was for a teacher doe buh ig u righh \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) why u thought it was for the teacher \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) bc he said "i love you Mrs what eva df her name was" \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) ohhh okayy i see how u thought that tho \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) yuhh lmaoo

yogirlkaylie:

@summerbabyy1217 u should dm me n les be friends

summerbabyy1217:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @yogirlkaylie @summerbabyy1217 u should dm me n les be friends \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) okayy bhet

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