Question

Here's a song I wrote the other night what do ya'll think?
Hold me tight
Block my sight
I don’t wanna lose you.
Like I have with a few

That’s why I have distanced
Because my heart has quickened
I’ve been lying to myself
About what I felt

Shaking off the chains
Let love play it’s game
Give a shout and a praise
For emotional ways

Hold me tight
Block my sight
I don’t wanna lose you.
Like I have with a few

Oh, block out the nose
Let's give our love it all boy
Let it sleep us away
Let's go to lovers day

Answer 1

really good I like it

Answer 2

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @bobbii
really good I like it
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Thanks

Answer 3

i really like it good jobb

Answer 4

Gurllll you got summm talent lols

Answer 5

i enjoy this, make more rode

Answer 6

This is just awesome.

Answer 7

nice

Answer 8

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @fuyo
i enjoy this, make more rode
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I have a whole lot more but someone keeps deleting my post everytime I try to get some feedback

Answer 9

Luckily no one has yet

Answer 10

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @linahere
nice
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thxs

Answer 11

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @RodeWolf
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @linahere
nice
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thxs
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yw

Answer 12

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
This is just awesome.
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Thank you

Answer 13

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @tiffbb101
Gurllll you got summm talent lols
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(lol) thxs

Answer 14

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @summerbabyy1217
i really like it good jobb
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Thank you

Answer 15

ok ima delete this and do another

Answer 16

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @RodeWolf
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @tiffbb101
Gurllll you got summm talent lols
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(lol) thxs
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Yw bb and sorry lols is what i do it's weird

Answer 17

thats great, its really good!