Question

Judge please comment
*The music starts blaring
I don’t give a frick who’s staring
My hips start swayin, and shakin
The beat increases
Every step collect the pieces
Pieces of my broken heart
That the a.ss hole shattered named Bart
Dancing saves me from going crazy
Or becoming hasty
Dancing lets me express what I feel
Then helps me heal
Heal from all the cuts and bruises
From that mother who’s abusive*

Answer 1

did u make it

Answer 2

Yes

Answer 3

nice,the lyrics are cool,but i have a question

Answer 4

yes

Answer 5

what beat does it have,like the way u sing it

Answer 6

@RodeWolf
I love the lyrics

Answer 7

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @IhelpUuHELPme
what beat does it have,like the way u sing it
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It's kinda like a rap

Answer 8

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @CocoCammron
@RodeWolf
I love the lyrics
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thxs

Answer 9

makes sense

Answer 10

i wove it

wove=love

Answer 11

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @IhelpUuHELPme
i wove it

wove=love
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(lol) thank you

Answer 12

yuhh i read this as a rap lol. it's nice. lyrics have true meaning so that's good!

good job

Answer 13

thats actually very good even tho i hate rap XD

Answer 14

What is all of u guys doing for thanksgiving

Answer 15

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @mxddi3
yuhh i read this as a rap lol. it's nice. lyrics have true meaning so that's good!

good job
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Thxs

Answer 16

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @linahere
thats actually very good even tho i hate rap XD
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*oof* but thxs

Answer 17

ok thank you all for the feedback have a good one

Answer 18

u too!