Question

i wrote this tell me what you think


Hey girl
With the pretty eyes
I dont mean to bother
But could you spare me your time
Saw you from over there
And wanted to see that smile
Up close
She said
Honey, im not looking for a gf
Im just here for a good time
And i said
Baby im not looking for forever
I just want to make you smile
Im not here for ur life story
And im not gonna tell you mine
Hey girl
With the pretty eyes
I dont mean to bother
But could you spare me your time
Saw you from over there
And wanted to see that smile
Up close
Im only tryna hang with you tonight
(Im not looking for love)
Im tryna drink the night away
(im not boutta catch feelings)
Before the sun comes up ill be on my way
Im not leaving with your number
Im not gonna remember your name
Aint nobody gonna get heartbroken
Nobody will heart for days
Trust me its just better this way

Answer 1

thats alot girl but it sounds nice

Answer 2

I think it has a good story but it could use more simplifying and metaphors in my opinion. :)

Answer 3

im proud

Answer 4

That's waay beettteeerr than i cudd do lol

Answer 5

..

Answer 6

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @linahere
..
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lol

Answer 7

intresting i guess LMBOOOOOOOOO

Answer 8

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @linahere
intresting i guess LMBOOOOOOOOO
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XDD

Answer 9

nice

Answer 10

looks good

Answer 11

thanks guys

Answer 12

could be a good song

Answer 13

yeah

Answer 14

it looks gooddddd

Answer 15

hold on let me get on spotify, find a good track, and record my audio, then we shall see..

Answer 16

what?

Answer 17

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @angelina157
what?
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ill find some music sing to it and see if its a good song lol

Answer 18

ok

Answer 19

i wanna hear i bet you sound good

Answer 20

good job

Answer 21

its good

Answer 22

omgg its amazingggg!

Answer 23

i really likeee

Answer 24

Amazing 💘💘

Answer 25

yea it is really good

Answer 26

it sonud goo

Answer 27

yes it does actually

Answer 28

it sounds great!!

Answer 29

cool

Answer 30

i like it :)

Answer 31

i like it :):):)

Answer 32

it's good. it's supa cute, i think as someone up there^ said, it could use like some metaphors or smth to spice it up. Overall, great job

Answer 33

PEARFECT

Answer 34

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @mxddi3
it's good. it's supa cute, i think as someone up there^ said, it could use like some metaphors or smth to spice it up. Overall, great job
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^^^^ Really cute. It's great. :)

Answer 35

OOF-

Answer 36

thanks guys. when i first posted it i was so scared no one would like it!

Answer 37

I love it sweetie!:) <3

Answer 38

i love it it has so much meaning!!!!

Answer 39

I love it!!

Answer 40

love it but you should add some repeeting words thats what every song does right?

Answer 41

but the song is amazing

Answer 42

Congrats on orange @hiiiihiiiiiiiiii

Answer 43

huh

Answer 44

@angelina157 what are you going to name ur song

Answer 45

Good time

Answer 46

nicee

Answer 47

i like the name

Answer 48

what grade do you get to make a song

Answer 49

i want to do it

Answer 50

I love that name!!

Answer 51

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @hiiiihiiiiiiiiii
what grade do you get to make a song
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i have a creative music class bc i couldnt do gym this year. its been so amazing so far

Answer 52

ooohhhhhhh

Answer 53

i really really like your song

Answer 54

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @hiiiihiiiiiiiiii
i really really like your song
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aww thank you. i have another one out too.

Answer 55

where

Answer 56

its in my asked questions

Answer 57

its about my dad

Answer 58

okk

Answer 59

i like it a lotttt, good job ! <3

Answer 60

like it

Answer 61

it is soooooo good

Answer 62

i like it 😛✌✌😜

Answer 63

My bf and I like it.

Answer 64

Tht sounds rly gud