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imnotsmartlol:

Review your ideas on your Narrative Organization Chart from lesson 03.02 Planning Your Narrative. Include your introduction paragraph with your body. Using ideas from your chart, write the body of your narrative. Be sure to include: Two sensory descriptions Dialogue Two events of rising actions Climax event Write 300 words or more in the body. This is what I wrote on the intro: It was a beautiful day out, the birds danced in the sky as the wind whispered through the trees. The two boys Kit and Watson were skipping along the road. Their eyes struck wide as their face shone from the reflection of the gold-ish yellow poster pasted on the high board fence. Dan’s words drooled out of his mouth as he read through the poster while Christopher admired the well taken pictures added to the poster. “Wow!,” exclaimed Kit. “Barlow’s Great North American Circus,” said Dan.

imnotsmartlol:

just need some help on it

imnotsmartlol:

lmao that pfp tho

umm:

Did you use the chart?

imnotsmartlol:

ye

imnotsmartlol:

Characters: Dan Clark and Christopher Watson Setting: The Great Barlow Circus Rising action: Dan and Christopher are trying to raise enough money to go to the circus. They would need 1 dollar but it's half price for children. Climax: They try many different things to earn money. Resolution of conflict: Their luck turns around and they start making money. Reflection: The reflection on this story is success comes with hard work and dedication.

imnotsmartlol:

im bad at ela

Elsa213:

Where’s the introduction? o:

Elsa213:

Owait

imnotsmartlol:

i may or may not have used some of the stuff u gave me and got a 100 on it

Elsa213:

Congratulations ^.^ <3 What did Kit and Dan do to try and earn money?

imnotsmartlol:

idk

imnotsmartlol:

havent thought that far ahead

Elsa213:

“There was great excitement in Smyrna, especially among the boys. Barlow's Great American Circus in its triumphal progress from state to state was close at hand, and immense yellow posters announcing its arrival were liberally displayed on fences and barns, while smaller bills were put up in the post office, the hotel, and the principal stores, and distributed from house to house. It was the largest circus that had ever visited Smyrna. At least a dozen elephants marched with ponderous steps in its preliminary procession, while clowns, acrobats, giants, dwarfs, fat women, cannibals, and hairy savages from Tibet and Madagascar were among the strange wonders that were to be seen at each performance for the small sum of fifty cents, children half price. For weeks the young people had been looking forward to the advent of this marvelous world of curiosities, and the country papers from farther east had given glowing accounts of the great show, which was pronounced greater and more gorgeous than in any previous year. But it may be as well to reproduce, in part, the description given in the posters: BARLOW'S GREAT NORTH AMERICAN CIRCUS. Now in its triumphal march across the continent, will give two grand performances, AT SMYRNA on the afternoon and evening of May 18th. Never in all its history has this unparalleled show embraced a greater variety of attractions, or included a larger number of world-famous acrobats, clowns, bare back riders, rope walkers, trapeze artists, and star performers, in addition to a colossal menagerie, comprising elephants, tigers, lions, leopards, and other wild animals in great variety. All this and far more, including a hundred DARING ACTS, can be seen for the trifling sum of fifty cents; children half price. COME ONE! COME ALL! Two boys paused to read this notice, pasted with pictures of elephants and circus performers on the high board fence near Stoddard's grocery store. They were Dan Clark and Christopher Watson, called Kit for short.“

imnotsmartlol:

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imnotsmartlol:

now that i got suspended from chat i can concentrate

carmelle:

I did this same assignment 2 weeks ago

imnotsmartlol:

niceeeee

imnotsmartlol:

elsas back

Elsa213:

Could be polishing shoes, washing cars, doing chores in the house...

imnotsmartlol:

icic

Elsa213:

They charge 5 cents. o;

Elsa213:

Butt when circus day comes, one has less change than the other and they cannot go if they don’t go together. Or maybe they lost their money. e.e

imnotsmartlol:

thats pretty mean

imnotsmartlol:

why would i make it so they cant get money thats kinda rude

Elsa213:

Boiiii That’s life. Spit on their dreams e.e

Elsa213:

Unless they did get money, but started spending. On circus day, they were broke.

AlphaMojo:

dang

AlphaMojo:

you still need help

Elsa213:

He poofed. e.e

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