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sky3355:

can yall help me on a song im writing

tiaunabuchan:

sure

Supreme02:

yah

sky3355:

thx

Supreme02:

np

sky3355:

ok this is what i started with so far

RodeWolf:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @sky3355 thx \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) i'm here to help

sky3355:

*music plays* when flying im thinking of u i makin my mind go over u i cant find the way i came for u its so far so hard ...

sky3355:

idk if its gud but im workin on it since yesterday

Supreme02:

thats good

RodeWolf:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @sky3355 idk if its gud but im workin on it since yesterday \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) omg nice ngl

sky3355:

thanks

Jaqueline:

It's a little confusing lyrically. I would make sure that the listener can really understand your feelings

sky3355:

ok

sky3355:

can u help me then

sky3355:

guess not thanks anyways

Jaqueline:

What about this... "When flying I think of you, can't make up my, can't get over you" "I came for you, can't find my way back. Came so far, so far for you"

RodeWolf:

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Jaqueline What about this... "When flying I think of you, can't make up my, can't get over you" "I came for you, can't find my way back. Came so far, so far for you" \(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\) da.** nice

sky3355:

oop

sky3355:

god y cant i think of that

Jaqueline:

Idk if it will fit with your melody, but hope it helps.

sky3355:

When flying I think of you, can't make up my, can't get over you" "I came for you, can't find my way back. Came so far, so far for you, i wish i were there with u

sky3355:

When flying I think of you, can't make up my, can't get over you" "I came for you, can't find my way back. Came so far, so far for you, i wish i were there with u

sky3355:

it does fit thank u so much

Jaqueline:

No problem :)

sky3355:

:)

sky3355:

😁

Jaqueline:

If you get famous, mention me lol

sky3355:

i will lol

sky3355:

ur the best thank u thank thank u

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