Question

tell me what you thank


Everyday when I look at you all I see is a picture on my wall . when i see you ya ya all i wanna do is cry when i see you. i see a picture on my wall ya ya when see you all i wanna do is cry. when i look in your eyes all i wanna do i cry ya ya ya ya when i wanna see you i can't. all wanna do is see your eyes one last time but i can't when i look in your eyes all i wanna is cry. All i wanna do is look in your eyes when i look your eyes one last time all i wanna do is cry ya ya when see your eyes all i wanna do is cry just one last i wanna see you ya ya all i wanna do is see you one last time ya ya ya ya when i look in your eyes all i wanna do is cry ya ya. When i look in your eyes i see a picture on my wall and all i wanna do is cry one last time ya ya.

Answer 1

it is good i like it

Answer 2

ty

Answer 3

what do you thank

Answer 4

Maybe u could ease up on the repeat of some-words?

Answer 5

Ease Up:Do stuff less

Answer 6

okkk

Answer 7

Example: ya


Other than i would like to actually hear your song being sung its looks pretty good :)

Answer 8

well some of the most popular songs contain lots of repetition.
i think that it makes it your own, shows YOUR style.
i like it.
personally, i wouldn't change that....
great job :)

Answer 9

It's good.

Answer 10

its good

Answer 11

thanks

Answer 12

I don’t like it that much but good job ig

Answer 13

ohh ok

Answer 14

anyone like my song