Question

heres what i have so far for my creative writing class. it needs to be a little bit longer.. what can i add

Sitting here
Feeling dumb
Wondering i went wrong
You were my everything
And now im just numb
Looking back
Missed all the red flags
Had me convinced we were meant to be
Had me overlooking the bruises
And all the lies
You were always your phone
I shouldn't have been surprised
When i caught you with her
But how was i not good enough

Answer 1

i thot you was done

Answer 2

it needed to be longer. i tried turning it in and he said i needed to add to it

Answer 3

Looks good so far add some more tho and have correct punctuation

Answer 4

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @hep
Looks good so far add some more tho and have correct punctuation
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
its a song? you dont put punctuation?

Answer 5

🤣🤣🤣 didn’t know it was a song sorry I have 0 sleep I just saw creative writing

Answer 6

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @hep
🤣🤣🤣 didn’t know it was a song sorry I have 0 sleep I just saw creative writing
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
please refrain from commenting on my posts. thank you!

Answer 7

bro you just got roasted hep 😂😂🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😂😂

Answer 8

lolo sorry

Answer 9

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @starbucksgirl13
lolo sorry
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Yeah I guess I did lmao I also just had a head injury and found out some really cool stuff

Answer 10

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @hep
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @starbucksgirl13
lolo sorry
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Yeah I guess I did lmao I also just had a head injury and found out some really cool stuff
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
i asked you politely to not comment on my stuff