Question

Another song! I know! But i'm only halfway done with this one. Tell me what you think so far!

You never listen
Do you
You didnt believe me
But i knew
I knew how it would end
We’d both get hurt
I warned you
We should just stay friends
But even when i pushed you away
You wouldnt go
You begged to stay
I told you i know
It happens every time
You cant fix me
I told you to go away
And just leave me be
But you wouldnt hear it
You wanted to try
You said itd be ok
You’d never make me cry
But now look at us
We dont even talk
We both sit alone on the bus
You cant even look at me
im so sorry
But we’re both guilty
You never listen
Do you
You didnt believe me
But i knew
I knew how it would end
We’d both get hurt
I warned you
We should just stay friends
Do you hate me yet
I told you to stay away
I told you i wasnt ready yet
But u insisted
You said we could fix each other
I told you not to bother
You said i couldnt force you away
Even when i said i hate you
I just wanted to keep you safe
I told you what i had to
To get you away
If i hadnt
You’d have wanted to stay

Answer 1

Its nice.

Answer 2

noice

Answer 3

It is amazing, you really have a talent.

Answer 4

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
It is amazing, you really have a talent.
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awe thank you!

Answer 5

lol i love it

Answer 6

its cool what r u writing it for

Answer 7

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Timmyspu
its cool what r u writing it for
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sometimes i get lyrics in my head and just see how far i can go with them. this is how this partial song came about. i got the lyrics : you never listen/do you/you didnt believe me/ but i knew/ and i just took the lyrics and played with them until i got this

Answer 8

sometimes it helps if you have something or someone to write your music for

Answer 9

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Timmyspu
sometimes it helps if you have something or someone to write your music for
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i usually do. this was about someone. but it didnt start out that i was just trying to write a song about them. it kinda just happened

Answer 10

u wrote it?

Answer 11

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @itzking
u wrote it?
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yes i did

Answer 12

nice

Answer 13

Its more than nice its wonderful

Answer 14

You're very talented. Keep up the great work!

Answer 15

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @angelina157
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
It is amazing, you really have a talent.
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awe thank you!
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Np!

Answer 16

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @angelina157
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
It is amazing, you really have a talent.
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
awe thank you!
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Np!
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
U are a real gods gift

Answer 17

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @CocoCammron
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @angelina157
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
It is amazing, you really have a talent.
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
awe thank you!
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Np!
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
U are a real gods gift
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
thank you!

Answer 18

how do u get points?

Answer 19

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @angelina157
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @CocoCammron
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @angelina157
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
It is amazing, you really have a talent.
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
awe thank you!
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Np!
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
U are a real gods gift
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
thank you!
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Your Welcome

Answer 20

you guys are so sweet! i really appreciate the positive feedback!

Answer 21

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @itzking
how do u get points?
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well you get points by answering questions

Answer 22

like this?

Answer 23

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @angelina157
you guys are so sweet! i really appreciate the positive feedback!
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Your Welcome

Answer 24

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @itzking
like this?
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yes but it could also be considered spam if your just saying stuff. so be careful! i dont want you to get in trouble!

Answer 25

lol ight

Answer 26

wut

Answer 27

it beautifull

Answer 28

This is great no cap

Answer 29

well its good but is kinda hard to , you know, imagine the Instrumental but over all its good

Answer 30

It's great! Keep workin on it girly! ^-^

Answer 31

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @MiraAngel
It's great! Keep workin on it girly! ^-^
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thank you!

Answer 32

Its beautiful gurl, keep working hard!!

Answer 33

i love itt

Answer 34

this really spoke to me and u do great with lyrics I think you will be an awesome song writer if u want to be that

Answer 35

thank you guys!!!

Answer 36

np

Answer 37

thats is amazing!!💖💕❤😁😉😎😊😃😘😍👍😜👏

Answer 38

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @lizzie777
thats is amazing!!💖💕❤😁😉😎😊😃😘😍👍😜👏
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thxx

Answer 39

I'm late but. . . This is very beautiful. nice job. <3

Answer 40

lol

Answer 41

i coudn't think of this.

Answer 42

it's great

Answer 43

i think its really good

Answer 44

omggggggggggggggggg u are amzingggggggggggggggg wowowowow

Answer 45

i lovvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeeeeee it itssssssssssssssssss greattttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt

Answer 46

This was like 4,000 days ago

Answer 47

XP

Answer 48

she said she posted it today

Answer 49

Thanks for reporting me now

Answer 50

tf

Answer 51

yes i made it today

Answer 52

oop It sayed yesterday u made it

Answer 53

its says 5 hours ago

Answer 54

hey none of that in my comments

Answer 55

I mine i didnt it keeps say its updating like every hour

Answer 56

yea i dont update it but i do bump it every couple hours

Answer 57

No more comments unless it is relating to the original post. Thank you.

Answer 58

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @sammixboo
No more comments unless it is relating to the original post. Thank you.
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Are you like a moderator? Not being rude

Answer 59

Yes, I am :)

Answer 60

Oh sorry about that

Answer 61

I might sing this if u let me lol

Answer 62

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XluisX
I might sing this if u let me lol
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yea i dont have any beat to it yet so if u want to do that its fine

Answer 63

guuuudd

Answer 64

thanks

Answer 65

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @angelina157
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XluisX
I might sing this if u let me lol
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yea i dont have any beat to it yet so if u want to do that its fine
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Bettt just lmk when we can wrk on it

Answer 66

it sound's great '