Question

is this good? its for a project on the colony of Georgia!

The colony of Georgia was founded to protect South Carolina and other southern colonies from the Spanish invasion through Florida. The colony of Georgia was found by a man named James Oglethorpe, it took James Oglethorpe many years to plan this and two months to cross the Atlantic ocean, James Oglethorpe and about 114 other colonists founded the colony on January,2,1788. The colony of Georgia was full of natural resources such as timber, fish and great agricultural land. This is the main reason why their main industries were sugar, indigo, and rice. Also farming and plantations were important economic success for the colony. The Georgian colony faced many hardships. These include the lack of fresh, swampy land bred disease-bearing insects, the attacks by Indians and Spaniards that killed lots of settlers, and Georgia's trustee rule allowed no political freedom for the colonies laborers. This lead to the near failure of the colony within the first year. The first 20years of the Georgia the colony was referred to as trustee Georgia, the reason why is because during this time the board of trustees governed the colony of Georgia. On April 21,1732 King George signed a charter establishing the colony creating its governing board.

Answer 1

yes this is good their is a lot of info

Answer 2

Yea its good.

Answer 3

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Acolgrove
yes this is good their is a lot of info
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ok thanks

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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @CocoCammron
Yea its good.
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thanks

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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @MoMoMolli13
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @CocoCammron
Yea its good.
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thanks
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welcome

Answer 6

This is really good, the only things I would change up are little gramattical things. Here are them below

The colony of Georgia was found by a man named James Oglethorpe. It took James Oglethorpe many years to plan this and two months to cross the Atlantic ocean, James Oglethorpe and about 114 other colonists founded the colony on January 2,1788. ; Also, farming and plantations were important economic success for the colony. ; The first 20years of the Georgia the colony was referred to as trustee Georgia. The reason why is because during this time the board of trustees governed the colony of Georgia.

Answer 7

The semi-colon are breaks representing breaks within the paragraph to make it easier to spot the places

Answer 8

Other than that, it's really well written

Answer 9

@MrMudd183 tysm!

Answer 10

You're welcome :)

Answer 11

@MrMudd183 and @MoMoMolli13 It also says the Atlantic Ocean but no capital O for ocean

It also says "This lead to the near failure of the colony within the first year. "

the "lead" she used should be put as "led" not lead.

Answer 12

I didn't catch those while I was reading it, good eye @supie

Answer 13

@supie thanks

Answer 14

ik, thanks.

Answer 15

np