Question

"Ive been through so much I can't show without someone leaving. 12 counselors gone no one can help. Its been a long journey, my family and friends, the people I care about, they all leave once they find out - That my thoughts are dangerous, I'm finna be critical, I aint too political. My friend zone is declining. I might know what is mind over mind. I think I'll never be great, I think will always be hated. - And I don't understand why my mother left - like - She started the depression, and that led to compression. The search begins fir the happiness, but it never ends. Maybe i was destined to be alone, or am i just a clone? - I have so many burdens I gotta be quiet and look around. - And its amazing watching these people explaining why they are depressed - like - you are depressed because your parents took your phone - Damn y'all have no idea what depression is like - you constantly lose people because of it - my life crashes and I guess in poison to

Answer 1

everyone around me like arsinic

Answer 2

'm poison like arsinic. if you was inside of my head youd think im insane
only if you knew all the pain that i think about. another girl got me tripping i started smoking to drown out my thoughts now im with this girl lets not get hurt this time, she makes me smile when im down i better not drown and over think this, her smile makes me wanna kiss her her eyes want me to marry her, her luagh i could hear on repeat, ive had my heart broken two many times, im loosing my mind, Oreos feelinsgs but i agree with my feelings currently, only if she knew all the pain ive gone threw the Oreos she would have seen me do, my own family doesnt regonise me anymore, i dont know what i want to do or need to do, in my head im over complicate becuase of these thoughts i cant take the pain anymore feeling like im gonna be helpless one reason i feel happy is becusae of her now lets hope and pray she doesnt leave i know im a burden but she is gonna be the girl i marry

Answer 3

@R3al
this is a song i wrote

Answer 4

really

Answer 5

yes

Answer 6

Dang that's sick

Answer 7

eh

Answer 8

its good

Answer 9

ty

Answer 10

np

Answer 11

Nice!

Answer 12

/\ yeah, I know it's sick

Answer 13

That's really good.

Answer 14

who wanna vid chat dm for teh link

Answer 15

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jordangantt12
That's really good.
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thanks

Answer 16

should i go to a studio and record it?

Answer 17

yus

Answer 18

fs

Answer 19

????/

Answer 20

yeah you should

Answer 21

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @cpl106
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jordangantt12
That's really good.
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thanks
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np

Answer 22

ight i will soon

Answer 23

ok lmk

Answer 24

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jordangantt12
ok lmk
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will do

Answer 25

what kind of beat tho?

Answer 26

Um tbh idk what to say bout the song but you should do a beat like bunny

Answer 27

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @tiffbb101
Um tbh idk what to say bout the song but you should do a beat like bunny
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Estas hablando de un ritmo como Bad Bunny?

Answer 28

aww

Answer 29

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @nini
aww
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hmm?

Answer 30

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @cpl106
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @tiffbb101
Um tbh idk what to say bout the song but you should do a beat like bunny
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Estas hablando de un ritmo como Bad Bunny?
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Yesss

Answer 31

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @cpl106
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @nini
aww
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hmm?
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i like the song its critical

Answer 32

Niceee dude

Answer 33

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @tiffbb101
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @cpl106
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @tiffbb101
Um tbh idk what to say bout the song but you should do a beat like bunny
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Estas hablando de un ritmo como Bad Bunny?
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Yesss
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what kind of beat of his or simalir

Answer 34

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @bluehairedbish
Niceee dude
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ty

Answer 35

Dayum

Answer 36

btw yall thast not everything ive gone threw...i have more music but I'm not gonna post it because its to sad
apparently

Answer 37

good song

Answer 38

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @nini
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @cpl106
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @nini
aww
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
hmm?
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i like the song its critical
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wym

Answer 39

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @cpl106
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @tiffbb101
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @cpl106
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @tiffbb101
Um tbh idk what to say bout the song but you should do a beat like bunny
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Estas hablando de un ritmo como Bad Bunny?
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Yesss
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
what kind of beat of his or simalir
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Just any beat to me all his beats are good

Answer 40

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @cpl106
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @nini
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @cpl106
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @nini
aww
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
hmm?
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
i like the song its critical
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wym
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i just like it

Answer 41

should i contunie to right?

Answer 42

its nice just work on your spelling a bit ok ? n the phone part ong..

Answer 43

that song on here is a rough draft

Answer 44

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @cpl106
btw yall thast not everything ive gone threw...i have more music but I'm not gonna post it because its to sad
apparently
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
you can dm me. nth that could make me feel any worse and i like to hear other people express themselves.

Answer 45

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @sxdsouls
its nice just work on your spelling a bit ok ? n the phone part ong..
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frl u cant be depressed over a phone

Answer 46

thats deep o.o but its also nice so good job

Answer 47

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @nini
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @sxdsouls
its nice just work on your spelling a bit ok ? n the phone part ong..
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frl u cant be depressed over a phone
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there are teenagers who are just to addicted

Answer 48

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @nini
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @sxdsouls
its nice just work on your spelling a bit ok ? n the phone part ong..
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frl u cant be depressed over a phone
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right like how tf you gonna get "depressed" because you're parents took you're phone, like try watching you're two closest friends shot in front of you and watching them go lifeless in you're arms

Answer 49

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @sxdsouls
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @nini
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @sxdsouls
its nice just work on your spelling a bit ok ? n the phone part ong..
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
frl u cant be depressed over a phone
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
there are teenagers who are just to addicted
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ur right

Answer 50

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jordangantt12
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @cpl106
btw yall thast not everything ive gone threw...i have more music but I'm not gonna post it because its to sad
apparently
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
you can dm me. nth that could make me feel any worse and i like to hear other people express themselves.
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
ight

Answer 51

ngl love this sooo much

Answer 52

gracias

Answer 53

de nada

Answer 54

I love this song.

Answer 55

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Astrid1
I love this song.
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ty it took me 10 minutes to right