Question

Is this a good song for my cousins bc they love snow: I dream of rain
I dream of snow
When I was young and about ten
I got left behind in the snow
Our hearts full of rain they will trade
Lie broken in buildings made of snow
When the snowman brings the snow and the forest goes
Is it cold to be young
Every night is a new start
I wanna fall like the snow
A new sun is rising hope is gone. What should i add?

Answer 1

ooooooook

Answer 2

"theres nothing like snow in december" mabe?

Answer 3

hmm ok

Answer 4

That is pretty good so far but could use some work

Answer 5

yeah

Answer 6

Some motivation is people that you know or/and love or things that you like/love

Answer 7

ok