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Dear journal, I'm not an outdoorsy kind of girl, but when my neighbor Adelle invited me to go camping, I could hardly tell her I was afraid of bears and snakes and pretty much any wild animal. I had images of waking up in the middle of the night, my tent shaking to the rhythm of growls. I couldn't let Adelle know I was afraid. So, I packed my bags and waited at the door the morning we were to leave. To my great surprise, I discovered that camping isn't at all how I imagined. The park ranger assured us that no bears had been seen in the last five years, and to my great surprise, Adelle's family had a pop-up camper, so we weren't even in a tent. Adelle did get to see my true colors, though, when we were hiking. We came across a snake in the middle of the trail, and I've never run so fast in my life. Snakes aside, camping's not so bad.

What techniques could be used to improve this sample diary entry to make it interesting and effective at sharing the experience? Check all that apply.

( )adding reasons why the speaker was afraid
( )adding some dialogue
( )adding more description about what was ( )enjoyable about the camping trip
( )adding more information about bears
( )adding a description of the pop-up camper

im not asking for the answer i just need some help understanding this question

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i need help with this question

Dear journal, I'm not an outdoorsy kind of girl, but when my neighbor Adelle invited me to go camping, I could hardly tell her I was afraid of bears and snakes and pretty much any wild animal. I had images of waking up in the middle of the night, my tent shaking to the rhythm of growls. I couldn't let Adelle know I was afraid. So, I packed my bags and waited at the door the morning we were to leave. To my great surprise, I discovered that camping isn't at all how I imagined. The park ranger assured us that no bears had been seen in the last five years, and to my great surprise, Adelle's family had a pop-up camper, so we weren't even in a tent. Adelle did get to see my true colors, though, when we were hiking. We came across a snake in the middle of the trail, and I've never run so fast in my life. Snakes aside, camping's not so bad.

What techniques could be used to improve this sample diary entry to make it interesting and effective at sharing the experience? Check all that apply.

( )adding reasons why the speaker was afraid                   
( )adding some dialogue                                                   
( )adding more description about what was                          ( )enjoyable about the camping trip                                          
( )adding more information about bears
( )adding a description of the pop-up camper

im not asking for the answer i just need some help understanding this question

Pir8booty · Answer

no one ok i thought this site was to help me

Laylalyssa · Answer

The question is asking you "What techniques could be used to improve this sample diary entry to make it interesting and effective at sharing the experience? Check all that apply."

Which ones of the listed techniques will be useful to make the diary sample more relatable and interesting

Laylalyssa · Answer

$\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}$ @Pir8booty
no one ok i thought this site was to help me
$\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}$
you cant expect someone to answer the question automatically we aren't robots

Pir8booty · Answer

i know just no one was in here

Laylalyssa · Answer

Well I am, so basically the question is asking you "Which ones of the listed techniques will be useful to make the diary sample more relatable and interesting"

Pir8booty · Answer

ok thanks

Laylalyssa · Answer

np
you can now close the question