Question

so i finished my depression brochure and can you reveiw it

Answer 1

It looks great. I think u should add more color tho

Answer 2

what do you mean by that

Answer 3

its kinda short but its ok

Answer 4

I think it needs more information, and better structure.

Answer 5

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @nevaehhh
I think it needs more information, and better structure.
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same

Answer 6

yea same doo but keep up dah energy u get it done :D

Answer 7

Looking at the first column, you are being repetitive with the word "help". Perhaps you should find some alternatives or different solutions.

Answer 8

Also I don't see the symptoms in the second coloumn.

Answer 9

column*

Answer 10

everyone medal spam justus

Answer 11

me decidn whether to medal anyone :P

Answer 12

Also in the last column, sadness and appetite are misspelled

Answer 13

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @mufoslapz
me decidn whether to medal anyone :P
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medal me you gardening tool

Answer 14

awww ok u curln pipe <3

Answer 15

it looks perfect

Answer 16

You could also place the images in different areas, the placement doesn't seem right.

Answer 17

True

Answer 18

well, the first one is alright.

Answer 19

I can't help you with the brochure if you'd like. I can help you write and structure it better.

Answer 20

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @nevaehhh
I can't help you with the brochure if you'd like. I can help you write and structure it better.
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Can*

Answer 21

thanks, everyone :)