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Okay so a friend of mine and I started working on a song, the title is "Starting Over." I know this isn't an academic question but I wanted to get ppls opinions on it. If you like it plz let me know my writing a comment below. I couldn't have done it without @paris07 . She really helped make it come together. It's not finished but I wanted to see what you all think of it so far! @dontsaymyname @paris07 @xxcoffee @Laylalyssa Title: Starting Over I've been hurt I've been used and I'm a fool cuz I trusted you, you made me believe in a dream that would never come true.
I fell for it all,
Not knowing that I was walking right into your trap.
I was too blind to see it, that everything you said was lies
And now I'm paying the price with these tears falling down my face, watching you walk away
You didn't even look back, you left me in the past.
Just when I started letting my guard down
I should've known it was pointless but I wanted to give us a chance.
And now I'm the one broken in the end.
It's easy for you cuz you're not the one who has to deal with the pain.
I wish I could show you how it feels to be hurt for a change.
God, if only you could see things the way I do,
Maybe you'd know how hard it is to get over you.
Chorus:
Why can't I just open up (open up)
Maybe you could show me how to love (how to love)
You dream in silver and gold
My heart's already been sold
You had your chance but you blew it
You f*cked with my feelings just to do it.
I thought I knew what love felt like until you came around,
Now I can't feel anything but hurt.
Maybe I should give up and put a lock on my heart.
If I walked away why do I have all these bullet holes?
You were supposed to make me whole.
But now I'm left broken,
More than ever before.
You made me think I was the mistake all this time
But that was then and this is now.
I moved on somehow
yeah I'm getting stronger without ya baby oh I'm starting over yeahhhhhh starting over.
Verse 2:
You thought you got the best of me, but I'm stronger than you think.
I'm not the same person I was a month ago,
You can plead and beg but I'm done with all your "I want you backs" and "I'm sorries"
I hope you can change and be a different man.

Answer 1

Its great!

Answer 2

WHy is dis in BiOlogy?

Answer 3

Next time put it in music or maybe misc

Answer 4

Ngl Its a nice song

Answer 5

Amazing!

Answer 6

It's really good! Just like I told u in dm's <3

Answer 7

thxs oh and yeah nxt time I'll change the subject instead of it being a biology question lol

Answer 8

wow thats rlly good i write poems

Answer 9

Thxs @jmc25 Couldn't have done it without paris07..... lol And nice!

Answer 10

I love it!

Answer 11

Better than what ive come up with lately

Answer 12

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dgreer4
Thxs @jmc25 Couldn't have done it without paris07..... lol And nice!
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yeah yw i write all the time soo its rlly easy

Answer 13

This is really great we'll let you all see it when it's completely finished also!!!!!!! lol XD

Answer 14

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jmc25
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dgreer4
Thxs @jmc25 Couldn't have done it without paris07..... lol And nice!
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yeah yw i write all the time soo its rlly easy
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
yea, and very fun too. I find that writing songs, quotes, and poems allows you to put your feelings down. But also, It's something I really enjoy doing.

Answer 15

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dgreer4
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jmc25
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dgreer4
Thxs @jmc25 Couldn't have done it without paris07..... lol And nice!
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
yeah yw i write all the time soo its rlly easy
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
yea, and very fun too. I find that writing songs, quotes, and poems allows you to put your feelings down. But also, It's something I really enjoy doing.
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
same here! it is an outlet for me...these lyrics are of thing im going through rn ngl...writing it down is like therapy lmao

Answer 16

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @paris07
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dgreer4
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jmc25
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dgreer4
Thxs @jmc25 Couldn't have done it without paris07..... lol And nice!
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
yeah yw i write all the time soo its rlly easy
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
yea, and very fun too. I find that writing songs, quotes, and poems allows you to put your feelings down. But also, It's something I really enjoy doing.
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
same here! it is an outlet for me...these lyrics are of thing im going through rn ngl...writing it down is like therapy lmao
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
That's exactly how I see it! wow it makes me wonder how we're not sisters Paris. U r totally like me

Answer 17

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dgreer4
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @paris07
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dgreer4
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jmc25
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dgreer4
Thxs @jmc25 Couldn't have done it without paris07..... lol And nice!
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
yeah yw i write all the time soo its rlly easy
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
yea, and very fun too. I find that writing songs, quotes, and poems allows you to put your feelings down. But also, It's something I really enjoy doing.
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
same here! it is an outlet for me...these lyrics are of thing im going through rn ngl...writing it down is like therapy lmao
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
That's exactly how I see it! wow it makes me wonder how we're not sisters Paris. U r totally like me
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
lol...maybe we are lmao...we go through relationships on the same day...laugh at the same thing...think the same way..maney we were separated at birth lmao

Answer 18

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @paris07
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dgreer4
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @paris07
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dgreer4
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jmc25
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dgreer4
Thxs @jmc25 Couldn't have done it without paris07..... lol And nice!
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
yeah yw i write all the time soo its rlly easy
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
yea, and very fun too. I find that writing songs, quotes, and poems allows you to put your feelings down. But also, It's something I really enjoy doing.
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
same here! it is an outlet for me...these lyrics are of thing im going through rn ngl...writing it down is like therapy lmao
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
That's exactly how I see it! wow it makes me wonder how we're not sisters Paris. U r totally like me
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
lol...maybe we are lmao...we go through relationships on the same day...laugh at the same thing...think the same way..maney we were separated at birth lmao
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
IKR exactly! =) and maybe!!!!!!!!!! :-)

Answer 19

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dgreer4
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jmc25
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dgreer4
Thxs @jmc25 Couldn't have done it without paris07..... lol And nice!
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
yeah yw i write all the time soo its rlly easy
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
yea, and very fun too. I find that writing songs, quotes, and poems allows you to put your feelings down. But also, It's something I really enjoy doing.
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
yeeh it is

Answer 20

this is cool

Answer 21

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Acolgrove
this is cool
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Thxs @acolgrove! Special shoutout to @paris07 couldn't have done it without her!!!!! =)

Answer 22

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dgreer4
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Acolgrove
this is cool
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Thxs @acolgrove! Special shoutout to @paris07 couldn't have done it without her!!!!! =)
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smh...all i did was come up with a few lyrics smh

Answer 23

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @paris07
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dgreer4
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Acolgrove
this is cool
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Thxs @acolgrove! Special shoutout to @paris07 couldn't have done it without her!!!!! =)
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
smh...all i did was come up with a few lyrics smh
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Hehe it may seem like that. But you helped me in ways I can't explain. For being there for me. =) It means a lot @paris07

Answer 24

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dgreer4
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @paris07
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dgreer4
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Acolgrove
this is cool
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Thxs @acolgrove! Special shoutout to @paris07 couldn't have done it without her!!!!! =)
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
smh...all i did was come up with a few lyrics smh
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Hehe it may seem like that. But you helped me in ways I can't explain. For being there for me. =) It means a lot @paris07
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
well...you did the same for me

Answer 25

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @paris07
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dgreer4
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @paris07
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dgreer4
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Acolgrove
this is cool
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Thxs @acolgrove! Special shoutout to @paris07 couldn't have done it without her!!!!! =)
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
smh...all i did was come up with a few lyrics smh
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Hehe it may seem like that. But you helped me in ways I can't explain. For being there for me. =) It means a lot @paris07
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
well...you did the same for me
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Thts what sisters r 4 *grins and hugs u* @paris07

Answer 26

lol
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dgreer4
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @paris07
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dgreer4
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @paris07
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dgreer4
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Acolgrove
this is cool
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Thxs @acolgrove! Special shoutout to @paris07 couldn't have done it without her!!!!! =)
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
smh...all i did was come up with a few lyrics smh
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Hehe it may seem like that. But you helped me in ways I can't explain. For being there for me. =) It means a lot @paris07
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
well...you did the same for me
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Thts what sisters r 4 *grins and hugs u* @paris07
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)

Answer 27

Glad u guys liked it! We'll show you it when it's finished as well! I appreciate the support! Have a great day everyone!!!! :-)

Answer 28

You as well!

Answer 29

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dontsaymyname
You as well!
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I will thxs @dontsaymyname

Answer 30

Nice song its amazing. Keep it up and you will make it somewhere

Answer 31

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @IMURDADDY4EVER
Nice song its amazing. Keep it up and you will make it somewhere
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thank you!

Answer 32

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @paris07
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @IMURDADDY4EVER
Nice song its amazing. Keep it up and you will make it somewhere
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thank you!
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Tysm! I appreciate it!

Answer 33

It's very adorable.

Answer 34

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @fuyo
It's very adorable.
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aww thanks so much fuyoooo!!!

Answer 35

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @fuyo
It's very adorable.
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aww glad u liked it! Couldn't have done it without @paris07!

Answer 36

omg i love this song. do you think you or your friend could help me. i want to write a song for my boyfriend and i want to sing it for him for either Christmas, which probably wont happen because thats a few days away, or his birthday which is in july.

Answer 37

Umm sure! but prbly not my friend something happened she said she is going to commit

Answer 38

oh no im sorry. ive been there. my best friend commited and i tried. just show her how much you care and hopefully you can show her its not the answer

but yea i want it to be about how much he means to me and how hes changed my life. i dont have much musical background. i did spend a semester learning poetry though. so if you could maybe help with both parts. i would really appreciate it

Answer 39

Sure...... How abt u dm me and I'll help

Answer 40

so for the song, it's really nice! When you are setting it up for us to read tho, maybe like separate it into like the chorus and 1st verse, 2nd verse, yk stuff like that. Also, it's hard to decide like the beat and all that, so it's like a bit of guessing, lol. But overall, it's really good, and seems like it has a bit of a personal connection maybe which is always great in a song. Can't wait to see it when it is finished!!!

Answer 41

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @mxddi3
so for the song, it's really nice! When you are setting it up for us to read tho, maybe like separate it into like the chorus and 1st verse, 2nd verse, yk stuff like that. Also, it's hard to decide like the beat and all that, so it's like a bit of guessing, lol. But overall, it's really good, and seems like it has a bit of a personal connection maybe which is always great in a song. Can't wait to see it when it is finished!!!
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
Oh thxs! I'll keep that in mind as well. Thanks for the support!!!! And I'll let u see the finished version when it's done!

Answer 42

omg thats so great i love it!

Answer 43

tysm!

Answer 44

really good