Question

PLZ HELP!! Even if it's just a sentence, plz helpppppp
Recently an influential auto safety group has called for states to increase the legal driving age from sixteen to seventeen or even eighteen in order to decrease teen traffic accidents and fatalities. In response to the auto safety group, your state government has crafted a bill to increase the driving age in your state to eighteen. Write a carefully worded e-mail to persuade your state senator or state representative to either pass this bill.

Answer 1

How would you like me to help?

Answer 2

@dgreer4

Answer 3

O, Nevermind.

Answer 4

If you could help me write a paragraph please on this topic, I have a few ideas, but I'm not sure.

Answer 5

Well, Let's get a Template shall we?

Answer 6

Okay, and heres some pro's to use in it
Pros:
Drivers will be more presumably responsible since they will be 18

It could possibly lower teen deaths


It could even reduce car insurance for families who may already be struggling

Answer 7

and some statistics to help
Youth Traffic Safety Statistics
Motor vehicle crashes are the leading cause of death for teens in the US.
Each year, more than 5,000 teens (ages 16-20) are killed in passenger vehicle crashes. . . .
Nationally . . ., 25 percent of the young drivers ages 15-20 who were killed in crashes had blood alcohol concentration (BAC) levels of .08 or higher at the time of the crash. . . .
. . . teenage drivers and passengers are among those least likely to wear their seat belts.
- National Highway Traffic Safety
Administration

Answer 8

And here is my thesis
A bill passed to raise the driving age would be beneficial to all involved and teaching maturity and especially in lowering teen deaths.

Answer 9

[date]

{recipientName:first} {recipientName:last}
{positionOf}
Majestic Company
123 Midway Drive,
Mega City, NY 42311

Dear, (...)






Sincerly,
(Your name)

Answer 10

Are you for it or against it?

Answer 11

For it

Answer 12

Well, you should provide info on risks that occurs with young adult drivers. My conclusion is "Younger drivers are less experienced, less responsible, and also less knowledgeable about driving and so it increases traffic incidents, whereas, Individuals at the age of 18 are more likely to be in fewer traffic incidents because they are more mature and responsible. But that's just my opinion. Hope this helps you JJ.

Answer 13

Okay, that is easier. You have more information to be able to send to your senator.

Answer 14

Right and thank youuuu Destiny, so my start or conclusion should be, Younger drivers are less experienced, less responsible, and also less knowledgeable about driving and so it increases traffic incidents, whereas, Individuals at the age of 18 are more likely to be in fewer traffic incidents because they are more mature and responsible.?

Answer 15

yes but you might need to gather more info and put it in ur own words but that's basically it.

Answer 16

What are the cons? You still need to be able to contradict, but also why that contradiction doesn't make it right.

Answer 17

Cons:
Less driving experience

More work for the parents

It would take longer for teens to learn about car safety

Answer 18

I would use it would take longer, as a contradiction like even though it would take longer, they would have more experience driving.

Answer 19

Right, So basically I think I need at least 2-3 paragraphs, I think

Answer 20

Yes you do jj.

Answer 21

So any ideas for an introduction paragraph?

Answer 22

Yes, so you are writing about history right?

Answer 23

No, its the topic above ^

Answer 24

Ok, so in your indertution paragraph you are going to say what your writing is going to be about like this: History is based on this this and that. and so forth. Paragraph are usually 4 to 5 sentences long.

Answer 25

Right, thank you

Answer 26

No problem!

Answer 27

Do you need anything else?

Answer 28

Yes, I need to know what to put in my body paragraph with the information i put earlier ^^^

Answer 29

@Maple

Answer 30

@XioGonz

Answer 31

0-0 halpssss, it's due in 4 hrs

Answer 32

Anybody? 0-0

Answer 33

I'm researching hold up

Answer 34

Okaii thankk uuuu

Answer 35

To begin with your introduction paragraph you have to really hook your reader, what are your ideas to do so?

Answer 36

Dear State Senator,
I am writing this letter to allow the pass of raising the legal age of driving.
A bill passed to raise the driving age would be beneficial to all involved and teaching maturity and especially in lowering teen deaths.
There are about highest number of accident gone from the age of 16 to the age of 25, Ages between 16-17 has the highest number of accidents involvement from the peak 2014. It determines that adolescent age takes a lot of risk by taking life's of people walking by or in the same car. Many of which age between 22-25 are inebriated way and driving car. If this continues, We would be giving this age allot of freedom and once they involved in an accident it is a felony they should agree to that. It is better for the people at an adult age to be given driving license.

Answer 37

I'm editing this to my own words, and including somehow the info from earlier ^^

Answer 38

Amazing response, you're on the right track

Answer 39

Its from brainly XDD

Answer 40

Wow XD

Answer 41

Well ion what to write, so I looked it up, I need to have it finished in 3 hrs lol

Answer 42

Oh welp good choice

Answer 43

yurp

Answer 44

you should put what you have so far on a google doc and add somepeople to it, i can help. i dont know for how long tho because i have a class in a few

Answer 45

I do have it on a google doc :<

Answer 46

ight, my email is 373246@students.bethelsd.org add me

Answer 47

It wont let me add, but you can just click this, https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Fj9XtR6AvJFOuuyPBIGDcEmsmgmKVkm-dAQGIEzBS9I/edit?usp=sharing

Answer 48

ight