ok so what yall think bout this poem??

I want you to know that,know matter what you say to me i promise it will never break me,I swear us meeting feels like destiny,But i don’t want you to hold things from me because were supposed to do ittogether,Baby we're gonna be forever,When you hold it in and keep it from me the hurt is so much worse,I don’t want your fake or rehearsed “everything is fine” act,Because that hurts more than a smack to the face,I'm ready to embrace the real hailey,It makes me crazy knowing that your hiding on the inside,Because baby no ones life is paradise,I apologize if i might seem blunt but that's because i want the real you,I want this relationship to be held up by steel and iron, not glue,And that's the truth,I'm not gonna assume “lifes great” no more i want your exposed and damagedside,Now you can decide and say no,I promise i won’t say goodbye,But i won't be satisfied,Really i’ll just be sad inside,Because i’ve tried to get you to open up,But then i get told “Cake that” metaphorically,I know being your exposed self is more risky,But my curiosity for you is getting to be as loud as a roaring sea,Performing these expectations will be hard i know i went through it,I know there will be conflict but we’ll handle as it comes,Now once we start getting you to open up there will be no going back no refund ,If you feel your being attacked im sorry,I changed my life for you,I was gonna go into the army but i chose you instead,Is it too much to ask for the same in return?I love you so much and i'm just concerned,To not be your true self around me is just absurd,

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ok so what yall think bout this poem??

I want you to know that,know matter what you say to me i promise it will never break me,I swear us meeting feels like destiny,But i don’t want you to hold things from me because were supposed to do ittogether,Baby we're gonna be forever,When you hold it in and keep it from me the hurt is so much worse,I don’t want your fake or rehearsed “everything is fine” act,Because that hurts more than a smack to the face,I'm ready to embrace the real hailey,It makes me crazy knowing that your hiding on the inside,Because baby no ones life is paradise,I apologize if i might seem blunt but that's because i want the real you,I want this relationship to be held up by steel and iron, not glue,And that's the truth,I'm not gonna assume “lifes great” no more i want your exposed and damagedside,Now you can decide and say no,I promise i won’t say goodbye,But i won't be satisfied,Really i’ll just be sad inside,Because i’ve tried to get you to open up,But then i get told “Cake that” metaphorically,I know being your exposed self is more risky,But my curiosity for you is getting to be as loud as a roaring sea,Performing these expectations will be hard i know i went through it,I know there will be conflict but we’ll handle as it comes,Now once we start getting you to open up there will be no going back no refund ,If you feel your being attacked im sorry,I changed my life for you,I was gonna go into the army but i chose you instead,Is it too much to ask for the same in return?I love you so much and i'm just concerned,To not be your true self around me is just absurd,

itzurgirlhay · Answer

@jmc25

jaquanlowery · Answer

yea

itzurgirlhay · Answer

$\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}$ @jaquanlowery
yea
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yeah what?

jaquanlowery · Answer

the poem its  actually ite i guess

itzurgirlhay · Answer

$\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}$ @jaquanlowery
the poem its  actually ite i guess
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can u do any better?

jaquanlowery · Answer

im sorry but i dont write poems i write raps

itzurgirlhay · Answer

$\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}$ @jaquanlowery
im sorry but i dont write poems i write raps
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exactly my point i thought my boyfriend did an amazing job

jaquanlowery · Answer

lols