Question

Hi! i wrote a song...pls tell me what yall think

Something that you wont do

Been goin' 'round, goin' 'round thinkin' you would
I tell myself, tell myself "Give it time, it will all be good"
i tell my friends, tell my friends, he's just misunderstood



There's so much of you that I try to ignore
'Cause every time you hold me,
I feel, I feel sure that you’re the one
but you always head out the door

You won't give your heart a chance to break
Standing in the shadows safe
Wish I could make you want to
'Cause you're something I can't undo
People say whatever falls just breaks
But we could be the ones who stay
Wish I could make you want to­­ooo
But I know it's something that you won't doooo

I'm sick of you, sick of you always sayin' you're gonna do
Do you think of me, think of me and the point that you've driven me to?

There's so much of you that I try to ignore
'Cause every time you hold me,
I feel, I feel sure that you’re the one
but you always head out the door
You won't give your heart a chance to break
Standing in the shadows safe
Wish I could make you want to
'Cause you're something I can't undo
People say whatever falls just breaks
But we could be the ones who stay
Wish I could make you want to­­ooo
But I know it's something that you won't-

It's just lyin' when you say you're in love with me
But undecided on just where that's supposed to lead
Whatchu want from me? Whatchu want from me?
It's just lyin' when you say you're in love with me
But undecided on just where that's supposed to lead
Whatchu want from me? Whatchu want from me?
Whatchu want from me? Oh

You won't give your heart a chance to break (yeah)
Standing in the shadows safe (no, no, oh)
Wish I could make you want to (make you want to)
'Cause you're something I can't undo (something I can't undo)
People say whatever falls just breaks
But we could be the ones who stay (stay)
Wish I could make you want to (wish I could make you want to)
But I know it's something that you
Won't do (something that you won't do)

It's something that you won't, you won't
It's something that you won't do, you won't do
You won't, you won't, it's something that you won't
It's something that you won't do

Answer 1

you did not right this

Answer 2

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Pir8booty
you did not right this
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thats my link..also

Answer 3

no how would i find it that quikly

Answer 4

it's good

Answer 5

if it is its good

Answer 6

Amazing! Maybe we can work on a song together one day

Answer 7

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
Amazing! Maybe we can work on a song together one day
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yea!! and thanks

Answer 8

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @paris07
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Pir8booty
you did not right this
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thats my link..also
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also...i can give you the link to my question...with that padlet on it...for more proof

Answer 9

its good paris

Answer 10

straight gas

Answer 11

i likeee

Answer 12

Nice!

Answer 13

this song is great!!

Answer 14

OMG I love it!! It's super good!!

Answer 15

hi idk

Answer 16

😌very decent song😌

Answer 17

It is a nice song. Could use some work but decent so far. I honestly do like it though. Keep it up and make more

Answer 18

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @IMURDADDY4EVER
It is a nice song. Could use some work but decent so far. I honestly do like it though. Keep it up and make more
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I do agree. But, so far it is amazing. Keep up the work @Paris07

Answer 19

nioce

Answer 20

what did i do

Answer 21

Paris, I love this! I love the creativity you used in this, <3

Answer 22

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dontsaymyname
Paris, I love this! I love the creativity you used in this, <3
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thank you so much

Answer 23

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @IMURDADDY4EVER
It is a nice song. Could use some work but decent so far. I honestly do like it though. Keep it up and make more
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thank you...and yes it is a work in progress

Answer 24

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Laylalyssa
😌very decent song😌
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thank you

Answer 25

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Supremesavage
its good paris
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thank you!

Answer 26

its good

Answer 27

straight gas

Answer 28

nice

Answer 29

gud

Answer 30

it's a good one!! I like it!!

Answer 31

thats hot

Answer 32

paris ur great!

Answer 33

its a really good song if it is yours, you did an amazing job on it and keep up the good work!!!

Answer 34

I love it but sadly it isnt your work

Answer 35

really good 0-0

Answer 36

the lyrics are really good and understandable.

Answer 37

goooood job :)

Answer 38

awesome song

Answer 39

I-it's amazing it's extravagent and lovely. You seem like you love doing this. I can't wait to see more of your songs. I love all the feelings you put into this. It's as if you threw in your emotions and it puts meaning behind the words that alone seem useless but together with emotion it paints an amazing picture