Question

Can someone give me there thoughts on this song I wrote?

I get so mad at myself
Cause I can’t seem to get my words out
But baby if you stick around
I’ll be sure to tell you all about
How much I love you
How much I need you
How much I want you
Baby, its true…

I don’t ever want to lose you, love
I don’t ever want to break your trust
I just want you to hold me tight
Shut me up and love me right

You make my heartbeat fast
If it was anyone else, it wouldn’t last

So, tell me you don’t want to lose me love
That you don’t want to break my trust
That you’ll hold me tight
Shut me up and love me right
Cause your always on my mind…

Answer 1

What does the song have to do with you being mad at urself?

Answer 2

It's very short and has no hook

Answer 3

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @owenjiang
yeah
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Nice try.

Answer 4

Nice song :D

Answer 5

I was saying I get mad atmyself cause sometimes I cant say how i feel and so i said it in the song

Answer 6

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @owenjiang
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @supie
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @owenjiang
yeah
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Nice try.
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?
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You tried deleting it.

Answer 7

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @supie
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @owenjiang
yeah
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Nice try.
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lol fr
he rly tried to delete it XD

Answer 8

Stop playing dumb.

Answer 9

the song isnt finished i was just asking for thoughts on it so far

Answer 10

I want to know what this song has to do wit u being mad at urself

Answer 11

make it longer

Answer 12

make it longer

Answer 13

It's a little short yes. I think we can add more lyrics. Hmm, maybe tell us the genre. And we can work ona hook and some verses. I think it's a good start to something that could be pretty awesome. Keep working on it, maybe have someone co-write it with you so you have ideas to bounce off one another. Maybe also include a beat or a tempo so ik how to read it properly. Overall, good job, luv!!

Answer 14

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @owenjiang
{size=25} NO SUPIE
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lmao

Answer 15

I like it

Answer 16

ty for the honesty ppl lol

Answer 17

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @owenjiang
WHO
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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @owenjiang
NO
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\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @owenjiang
me no dum supie
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Answer 18

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @owenjiang
NO SUPIE AND LAYLALYSSA
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how?

Answer 19

It's not that serious...

Answer 20

Owen, stay on topic or take it somewhere else please

Answer 21

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @mxddi3
Owen, stay on topic or take it somewhere else please
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umm

Answer 22

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @owenjiang
NO SUPIE AND LAYLALYSSA
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yell at me again and I'm never helping you on ur work

Answer 23

???

Answer 24

I wrote musik everyday hmu for more help

Answer 25

sry

Answer 26

:(

Answer 27

well I have another one if u guys want to give me ur thoughts

Answer 28

i wrote a song but i dont need ppl taking ing

Answer 29

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @JazzWill
well I have another one if u guys want to give me ur thoughts
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yes

Answer 30

Ight

Answer 31

alr..

Answer 32

hold on

Answer 33

I got sum songs of y'all wanna see em