Question

A rap I wrote and performed *once* open to all criticism
~ World Problems ~

They say the world isn't dangerous, must be a plagiarist. Those with lots of money, don't have a single worry, but those with less are always oppressed. But read the travel guide, the worlds problems it wont describe.
I don't make any false claim when I explain my complain.
55 million people die each year, and there still isn't a cure. The world is brittle, refuges are illegal? When there's plenty here, there's less there?
The facts are plain and simple, just listen to the beat; I wrote the words in a rap about the very problems that I see.
Giving healthy food to the wealthy, and little to the poor. No wonder there's starvation, from the old to the young.
You know your two plus two's, I know you do. But children 'round the world, cant even learn their A, B, C's.
Today it's clear to see, pollution is execution. Heart disease, lung cancer, the result of every breath.
True fact: 70% of the Earth is covered with water, how come people can't get what they need?
The statements that I've made are sadly true, no human can ever unmake our mistake. So I wrote a rap about the world that I see, if I offended you in any way, I'm so sorry, forgive me.
Lastly, I wanna give a shout-out to my mom and dad, 'cuz they taught me how to stand up and act and how to rap on time like that.

Answer 1

love it

Answer 2

woowwowoow goodddd

Answer 3

amazing

Answer 4

Outstanding

Answer 5

Also if you would like to hear me perform it, just dm me :)

Answer 6

this is my entire view of the world put in words. love it.

Answer 7

Nice! Amazing job jj, Maybe we could make a rap together sometimee

Answer 8

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BestBoiKirby
this is my entire view of the world put in words. love it.
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aww tysmmmmm <3

Answer 9

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XioGonz
Nice! Amazing job jj, Maybe we could make a rap together sometimee
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tyyy xioooo <33333

Answer 10

Np <3

Answer 11

fiya

Answer 12

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @KjSaif
fiya
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tysmmmm <3

Answer 13

Nice rap @dontsaymyname you should consider being a professional rapper

Answer 14

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @xxDeppressionxx
Nice rap @dontsaymyname you should consider being a professional rapper
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Aww tyyyyy <3

Answer 15

oooh i see you 😌this is cool 😎

Answer 16

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dontsaymyname
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @xxDeppressionxx
Nice rap @dontsaymyname you should consider being a professional rapper
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Aww tyyyyy <3
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Np

Answer 17

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @itsmehjay
oooh i see you 😌this is cool 😎
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tysmmm <3

Answer 18

i wanna hear it lol

Answer 19

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XluisX
i wanna hear it lol
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oof okayy dms :)

Answer 20

I want to hear it too

Answer 21

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @carlosesgirl
I want to hear it too
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Carlosss <3 dm me :) we gotta talk anyway

Answer 22

bet

Answer 23

I wanna hear too but for some reason i tried texting u but u weren't expecting messages 😭

Answer 24

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @itsmehjay
I wanna hear too but for some reason i tried texting u but u weren't expecting messages 😭
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fr?? Try again, maybe a glitch or ill dm u

Answer 25

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dontsaymyname
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @itsmehjay
I wanna hear too but for some reason i tried texting u but u weren't expecting messages 😭
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fr?? Try again, maybe a glitch or ill dm u
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YAY U BROKE DA CURSEEE

Answer 26

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dontsaymyname
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @itsmehjay
I wanna hear too but for some reason i tried texting u but u weren't expecting messages 😭
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fr?? Try again, maybe a glitch or ill dm u
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what about me did you want to talk about

Answer 27

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @XluisX
bet
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bet what

Answer 28

I told u in dms xD

Answer 29

i love it

Answer 30

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dontsaymyname
I told u in dms xD
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ok talk to you TM

Answer 31

okaiii

Answer 32

OMG SHORDIE BRAZY 💯💯💯💯💯

Answer 33

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @YSNJayy
OMG SHORDIE BRAZY 💯💯💯💯💯
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xDDD tysmmmm Jayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy <3

Answer 34

aight you better rap it to me in zoom >:C

Answer 35

\(\mathbb{\color{gold}{\overset{\bigstar ~~^\bigstar ~~\bigstar}{Also~Let~Me~Read~It~Sounds~Cool~Tho}}}\)

Answer 36

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @sxdsouls
aight you better rap it to me in zoom >:C
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o-0 bett :>

Answer 37

i like it

Answer 38

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @DEMO4L1ZE
i like it
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tysmmmmmmm Justice <3

Answer 39

o; beauty i wish i was like you now o;

Answer 40

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @TETSXPREME
o; beauty i wish i was like you now o;
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Aww shushhhhhh >.< tyyyy <3

Answer 41

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dontsaymyname
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @DEMO4L1ZE
i like it
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tysmmmmmmm Justice <3
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np

Answer 42

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dontsaymyname
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @TETSXPREME
o; beauty i wish i was like you now o;
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Aww shushhhhhh >.< tyyyy <3
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ANYTIME <3

Answer 43

bruh

Answer 44

\(\mathbb{\color{gold}{\overset{\bigstar ~~^\bigstar ~~\bigstar}{ITS~SO~GOOD~AAH}}}\)

Answer 45

UwU

Answer 46

i like it i like it i like it a lot .

Answer 47

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @sxdsouls
\(\mathbb{\color{gold}{\overset{\bigstar ~~^\bigstar ~~\bigstar}{ITS~SO~GOOD~AAH}}}\)
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tysmmmmmmmmmmm Fernyyy <3

Answer 48

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jas2024
i like it i like it i like it a lot .
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tyyysmmmmmmmmmm Jasssssss <333

Answer 49

Jordan*

Answer 50

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jas2024
Jordan*
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I know, but i wasn't sure if you wanted me to call u that on herrrrreeeee

Answer 51

its awesome

Answer 52

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @UWANTEDSKILL
its awesome
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tysmmm <3

Answer 53

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dontsaymyname
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @UWANTEDSKILL
its awesome
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tysmmm <3
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yw

Answer 54

Ooh nice words. I LOVE IT SO MUCHHHH!!!!! Maybe we can rap together sometime. (I can rap and also I'm writing my own lyrics but t's never finished) Here r the hearts ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Answer 55

Firstly, I really like the subject of matter, not a lot of people rap about our world problems so I give you respect for that. Now reading the actual piece, there could have been some changes in a line or two but otherwise its great! I notice your effort, keep at it. :)

Answer 56

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @kimberlydereza
Ooh nice words. I LOVE IT SO MUCHHHH!!!!! Maybe we can rap together sometime. (I can rap and also I'm writing my own lyrics but t's never finished) Here r the hearts ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Aww tysmmmmm Kim <3 and yes that would awesome :)

Answer 57

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @justus
Firstly, I really like the subject of matter, not a lot of people rap about our world problems so I give you respect for that. Now reading the actual piece, there could have been some changes in a line or two but otherwise its great! I notice your effort, keep at it. :)
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tysmmmmmmm Justussssssss, I appreciate that <3

Answer 58

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dontsaymyname
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @justus
Firstly, I really like the subject of matter, not a lot of people rap about our world problems so I give you respect for that. Now reading the actual piece, there could have been some changes in a line or two but otherwise its great! I notice your effort, keep at it. :)
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tysmmmmmmm Justussssssss, I appreciate that <3
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NP!! <3

Answer 59

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dontsaymyname
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @kimberlydereza
Ooh nice words. I LOVE IT SO MUCHHHH!!!!! Maybe we can rap together sometime. (I can rap and also I'm writing my own lyrics but t's never finished) Here r the hearts ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Aww tysmmmmm Kim <3 and yes that would awesome :)
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Npppp ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Answer 60

that is good, good job!

Answer 61

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @AlwaysMe
that is good, good job!
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Tysmmm <3 I appreciate it

Answer 62

yessiiirrr bsfffff

Answer 63

tyyyy bsfffffff <3

Answer 64

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dontsaymyname
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @sxdsouls
\(\mathbb{\color{gold}{\overset{\bigstar ~~^\bigstar ~~\bigstar}{ITS~SO~GOOD~AAH}}}\)
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tysmmmmmmmmmmm Fernyyy <3
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np **BurPp*

Answer 65

nani?

Answer 66

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @sxdsouls
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dontsaymyname
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @sxdsouls
\(\mathbb{\color{gold}{\overset{\bigstar ~~^\bigstar ~~\bigstar}{ITS~SO~GOOD~AAH}}}\)
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tysmmmmmmmmmmm Fernyyy <3
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np **BurPp*
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xDDDD ur excused

Answer 67

I think it is really good, and good job for making this!

Answer 68

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @CourtneyWatson
I think it is really good, and good job for making this!
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tysmmm Courtney!!! <3

Answer 69

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dontsaymyname
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @CourtneyWatson
I think it is really good, and good job for making this!
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tysmmm Courtney!!! <3
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Your welcome! <3

Answer 70

yall still on this lmaooooooooooo

Answer 71

LOL i'm just here for the late comers :)

Answer 72

oi i was one of the first

Answer 73

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BestBoiKirby
oi i was one of the first
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Yes u were :) ty Business Partner

Answer 74

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dontsaymyname
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jas2024
Jordan*
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I know, but i wasn't sure if you wanted me to call u that on herrrrreeeee
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oh ye i forgot to tell yu . well ye ppl kno . idrx tbh .

Answer 75

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jas2024
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dontsaymyname
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @jas2024
Jordan*
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I know, but i wasn't sure if you wanted me to call u that on herrrrreeeee
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
oh ye i forgot to tell yu . well ye ppl kno . idrx tbh .
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ohhhh lolll

Answer 76

BWAHAHAAHAHa

Answer 77

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @AwehItzJackie
BWAHAHAAHAHa
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I'm glad you found it amusing... ;-;

Answer 78

My RAp WAs BeTTER u-u ABOut THe LiPHe LIpS

Answer 79

>.>

Answer 80

AWSOME JOB THATS MY SISTER? GF WOOOHOOO

Answer 81

Lmao

Answer 82

it was rly coooooooool good job

Answer 83

hi layla

Answer 84

lolololol yall still on thisss

Answer 85

Litttttt start a youtube u good

Answer 86

Damn sis! You go, girl!!!

Answer 87

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Monshiiee
AWSOME JOB THATS MY SISTER? GF WOOOHOOO
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tyyyy <3

Answer 88

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Brittlynn1019
Damn sis! You go, girl!!!
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tysmmmm <3

Answer 89

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @thebestdancer
Litttttt start a youtube u good
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aww tysmmm <3

Answer 90

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Laylalyssa
it was rly coooooooool good job
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tysmm <3

Answer 91

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dontsaymyname
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Brittlynn1019
Damn sis! You go, girl!!!
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tysmmmm <3
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Lmao you know it!

Answer 92

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dontsaymyname
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Laylalyssa
it was rly coooooooool good job
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tysmm <3
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np <3😁

Answer 93

Its really nice

Answer 94

Tht SH*TT deep

Answer 95

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @430370
Its really nice
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Tysmmm <3

Answer 96

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @LilRedd23
Tht SH*TT deep
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Tyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy <3

Answer 97

OOOO j gotta love it! U doin rlly good!

Answer 98

its so good i wish i was this talented !!

Answer 99

oh they're pretty good. I like it!!

Answer 100

That is really amazing!!! Good job I like it ...

Answer 101

Thank you, all of you <3

Answer 102

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dontsaymyname
Thank you, all of you <3
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np

Answer 103

bro how is this q still going

Answer 104

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BestBoiKirby
bro how is this q still going
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lol i have no idea

Answer 105

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dontsaymyname
Thank you, all of you <3
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you're welcome!! <3333

Answer 106

it's pretty good!