Question

[Poem i made. Criticism welcome and encouraged.]

Frozen Winter Memories

By BrotherBear

As the frost creeps across the glass
And the snow pours down from the sky
As I wrap myself in the warmth of the past
And I let out a relaxed sigh
I indulge in the memories of old
Of christmas past and fun in the snow
Of hot cocoa fending off the new winters cold
And of the wonder as the moon shines its brightest glow
I lose myself in the cute winter cartoons
And the classic christmas fables
Photos of laughing people strewn
Across the walls and in frames on certain tables
Here's to the memories of yore
And to the hopes of making more
Because that's what winters for

Answer 1

I love this! It was very... reminiscent of past winters/Christmases. Good job!

Answer 2

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @nevaehhh
I love this! It was very... reminiscent of past winters/Christmases. Good job!
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Thank you!!!

Answer 3

Wow really like this poem,words really just stand out and seem so peaceful.

Answer 4

The overall mood of this is calm and peaceful. I like the way the poem was set up. Makes me feel comfortable and when you mention memories of old Christmas and fun in the snow, it makes me think of that as well. It's really nice, but super short. Anyways, good job. If you have any others, it'd be cool to read them (:

Answer 5

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @mxddi3
The overall mood of this is calm and peaceful. I like the way the poem was set up. Makes me feel comfortable and when you mention memories of old Christmas and fun in the snow, it makes me think of that as well. It's really nice, but super short. Anyways, good job. If you have any others, it'd be cool to read them (:
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I do have a few others, i can post them or send them to you if youd like

Answer 6

you can send me them to avoid making numerous posts or adding too many comments (:

Answer 7

i love itt!