Question

PLEASE CRITICIZE LEE SONG

In the distance, the wind howls. they walk on the sidewalks, with their hoods down. holding hands, peaceful bliss, unti the day when tragedy hit. She misses you. she wished it could've been her, instead of you. she misses you. She wonders why, she let you.

wondering how to do this math problem. she struggles, what is this formula? from behind her, a note gets thrown. she opens it and a smile showed. the boy across the classroom, wants to help her study her math soon. She misses you, she wished it could've been her, instead of you. she misses you, she wonders why she let you.

In the distance, the wind howls. They walk on the sidewalks with their hoods down. Holding hands peaceful bliss, until a man walks up to them.

They offered a ride home. They accepted. They got into his car. So foolish. The man pulls out a gun, says shes gonna shoot one of em, the boy volunteers, the girl objects, he aims the gun, to his head. the girl screams, reaching for him, but not before he was already dead.

She misses you, she wishes it could've been her, instead of you. She misses you. She wonders why she let you. She runs away, as fast as she can, her mind was troubled then, with almost no sound. she goes home, acts like everythings fine. her parents should've watched her so she wouldn't cry, but now shes gone. rope on her neck, shes gone. never come back, shes gone. shes gone.........

She misses you. she wished it could've been her, instead of you. she misses you. She wonders why, she let you.

Answer 1

PLEASE CRITICIZE YEEt

Answer 2

SONGGG

Answer 3

3/10 sound more like a book

Answer 4

How did you read that so fast..? Anyways, thank you for the criticism

Answer 5

😏

Answer 6

c;😏

Answer 7

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @SugarDaddy
c;😏
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;)

Answer 8

@dontsaymyname @Aqual @sxdsouls @TETSXPREME

Answer 9

lmaooooo😏😏😏

Answer 10

hol up gotta goo peeee

Answer 11

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @SugarDaddy
lmaooooo😏😏😏
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:0 ;) :)

Answer 12

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @TETSXPREME
hol up gotta goo peeee
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u always gotta go peeee😏

Answer 13

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @SugarDaddy
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @TETSXPREME
hol up gotta goo peeee
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u always gotta go peeee😏
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hehe ;)

Answer 14

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @loganisbored
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @SugarDaddy
lmaooooo😏😏😏
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:0 ;) :)
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c; c; c;😏xD

Answer 15

please dont make this question a casual conversation. thats what the chats are for thank you

Answer 16

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @SugarDaddy
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @loganisbored
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @SugarDaddy
lmaooooo😏😏😏
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:0 ;) :)
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c; c; c;😏xD
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hehe ;)

Answer 17

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BestBoiKirby
please dont make this question a casual conversation. thats what the chats are for thank you
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^^^

Answer 18

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BestBoiKirby
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BestBoiKirby
please dont make this question a casual conversation. thats what the chats are for thank you
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^^^
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k sry

Answer 19

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BestBoiKirby
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BestBoiKirby
please dont make this question a casual conversation. thats what the chats are for thank you
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^^^
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<3

Answer 20

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @loganisbored
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BestBoiKirby
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BestBoiKirby
please dont make this question a casual conversation. thats what the chats are for thank you
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^^^
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k sry
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God Bless You Kirby🙏🏼🖐🏼😜😏

Answer 21

Not me crying bruh

Answer 22

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @sxdsouls
Not me crying bruh
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LMAO

Answer 23

Bruh Kirby I dont know if you wrote this or not but i- its so good-

Answer 24

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @sxdsouls
Bruh Kirby I dont know if you wrote this or not but i- its so good-
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i wrote it. i wrote another 2 secs ago too, but i dont hink ou saw it.

Answer 25

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BestBoiKirby
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @sxdsouls
Bruh Kirby I dont know if you wrote this or not but i- its so good-
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i wrote it. i wrote another 2 secs ago too, but i dont hink ou saw it.
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One sec. Its good 10/11

Answer 26

hi

Answer 27

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Aqual
hi
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hi e.e

Answer 28

thats all i have to say about it

Answer 29

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Aqual
thats all i have to say about it
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LMAOOOO

Answer 30

¨dont turn this into a casual conversation¨ -_-

Answer 31

lol

Answer 32

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @loganisbored
¨dont turn this into a casual conversation¨ -_-
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they rating it, and giving opinions, nit -_- :) ) :0 0//0 *insert random emoticon here*

Answer 33

c;😏

Answer 34

cOoL

Answer 35

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Laylalyssa
cOoL
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thanks? lol

Answer 36

I think it's nice, not sure its a song, but I like the feeling and idea behind it Kirbs <3

Answer 37

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BestBoiKirby
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Laylalyssa
cOoL
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thanks? lol
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yest

Answer 38

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Laylalyssa
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BestBoiKirby
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Laylalyssa
cOoL
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thanks? lol
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yest
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XDDDDD

Answer 39

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BestBoiKirby
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Laylalyssa
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BestBoiKirby
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Laylalyssa
cOoL
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thanks? lol
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yest
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XDDDDD
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lmao

Answer 40

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dontsaymyname
I think it's nice, not sure its a song, but I like the feeling and idea behind it Kirbs <3
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again, this one is another slower paced one, i would sing it butttt i suck at singing

Answer 41

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BestBoiKirby
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dontsaymyname
I think it's nice, not sure its a song, but I like the feeling and idea behind it Kirbs <3
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again, this one is another slower paced one, i would sing it butttt i suck at singing
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u can at least try

Answer 42

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BestBoiKirby
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dontsaymyname
I think it's nice, not sure its a song, but I like the feeling and idea behind it Kirbs <3
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again, this one is another slower paced one, i would sing it butttt i suck at singing
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You could always use your baby voice :>

Answer 43

\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Laylalyssa
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @BestBoiKirby
\(\color{#0cbb34}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @dontsaymyname
I think it's nice, not sure its a song, but I like the feeling and idea behind it Kirbs <3
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again, this one is another slower paced one, i would sing it butttt i suck at singing
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u can at least try
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and i self concious
YEEEEt